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February 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What a lovely story, love the family way this story was written in, all in all very heart-warming. Please do some more stories.
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October 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Read it again. ####GUSH####
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August 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I totally agree with the others! This should definetly be more than a one shot. It's too good to be just a one shot XD!!!
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February 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
there should so be a chapter 2 love it. can't wait to see what else you can do.
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January 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was great!Loved how Riki made Iason cook!
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December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You are absolutely evil!!! Making me think Riki had died!!! I thought my heart was going to stop at the whole "it had to have been hard without Riki" stuff. I can't remember the exact words but it was something like that.
Oh my god that was just amazing though!!!! You should defintely have more to it about when the kids are grown up. And why did all three of them have to be boys? Why couldn't Riki have a boy and a girl since he had twins? Well... whatever it was still awesome!!!
~nekluvshp
Oh my god that was just amazing though!!!! You should defintely have more to it about when the kids are grown up. And why did all three of them have to be boys? Why couldn't Riki have a boy and a girl since he had twins? Well... whatever it was still awesome!!!
~nekluvshp
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December 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just love reading this story and I had to laugh at the ending.Maybe you could make a sequel about the kids as teenager or young adult and what they are doing.
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December 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww, the twins were so sweet.
No wonder Riki got so a huge appetite, all tired and so big, he carried two BLONDIES at a time!!! I was thinking if that's because he's carrying a half blondie. Then again, Katze was carrying one too but he seemed got normal size.
I guess Riki finally got his hand full and didn't have to complained having too much idle time now with not two but three
blondies fighting for his attention.
Who would expect Iason had to fight against his own sons over his beloved mongrel? His beloved mongrel and their twins were indeed the death of him. This reminded me of a friend of mine. Her baby boy has been bullying his daddy since two-year-old. When he got nice stuff to share, he went to mommy. When he was in a mess, he went to daddy. Leaving the good for mommy and the bad for daddy. Poor guy (the father).
I wonder where Katze found time for the family. I wonder what the kids called Jupiter. Gramma Jupiter? hehe... I also wonder if the twins will fall for the same person when they grow up.
Too bad this is an one-shot. I'd love to see more of the fathers and daddies playing with their babies. It was so much fun to read.
No wonder Riki got so a huge appetite, all tired and so big, he carried two BLONDIES at a time!!! I was thinking if that's because he's carrying a half blondie. Then again, Katze was carrying one too but he seemed got normal size.
I guess Riki finally got his hand full and didn't have to complained having too much idle time now with not two but three
blondies fighting for his attention.
Who would expect Iason had to fight against his own sons over his beloved mongrel? His beloved mongrel and their twins were indeed the death of him. This reminded me of a friend of mine. Her baby boy has been bullying his daddy since two-year-old. When he got nice stuff to share, he went to mommy. When he was in a mess, he went to daddy. Leaving the good for mommy and the bad for daddy. Poor guy (the father).
I wonder where Katze found time for the family. I wonder what the kids called Jupiter. Gramma Jupiter? hehe... I also wonder if the twins will fall for the same person when they grow up.
Too bad this is an one-shot. I'd love to see more of the fathers and daddies playing with their babies. It was so much fun to read.