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for Overheated Ctarl

by SSJ04Mewtwo

person DaPoet
schedule September 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
DAMN!!! I WANT MORE!!! Base on the adivise of a friend I came this website and thus far have only read this story, but if this story is any indication of how good the rest is I may become a 1.5'er and never enter the real world again. Thanks. I REPEAT I WANT MORE!!!!

With luv,

Da poet
person DaPoet
schedule September 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_st.php/19919 Outlaw Star: Growing Pains

For the last 3 years I re-read this story every 6-9 months. I just found out today about the authors passing. I am happy to know that one of my reviews (under a different name: dapoet) he enjoyed. I've been meaning to post the old story he based part of this one for a while now. But I'm saddened that he didn't see it. RIP good friend and write more in heaven I would love to see what you can come up with.
person Anon
schedule June 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good. Could have used a bit more detail, (did the blond guy ever get a name?) And wow, so many spelling errors, but overall quite enjoyable: B+
person Tenchi's_Wife
schedule January 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
absolutely loved this story! ^.^ just wanted to say that. also, curious. does Jim become a father? and does Gene ever become one as well?
person Found You!
schedule September 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yes! I had a craving to read this story recently but it was no longer on FF.net and I was afraid I would never get to see it again! Heh, time to enjoy this story again. And so this wasn't a complete waste of your time to read, I feel I should point out that the only problem I have with this story is that all of your OCs are nameless. Even though you took some of them from other places I feel you should still at least give them A name. It would help the story flow better I think.
schedule January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Excellent just finished reading it and its great are all your stories this adventurous if so keep up the good work
person DaPoet
schedule October 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
DAMN!!! I WANT MORE!!! Base on the adivise of a friend I came this website and thus far have only read this story, but if this story is any indication of how good the rest is I may become a 1.5'er and never enter the real world again. Thanks. I REPEAT I WANT MORE!!!!

With luv,

Da poet
person Igobymanynames
schedule May 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A pirate hangar you say? *Eyes light up*

Sorry for not reviewing for a while, I just didn't want to spam you with comments that were pretty much identical in their praising of your epicness!

Also, soooooooooooooooooooo many kinks could come out of this! I don't know what you find appealing, but im going to suggest bondage gear, because bondage is awesome. Also, Aisha in a collar (And not much else ;) ) pushes all the right buttons for me. Also, the sheer volume of jokes that could be made has some appeal.

However if this was less a kink request and more of a plot thing, I'd like to see a stash of something the humans consider useful, but the Ctarls see as heinous, just to ratchet up the tension between the alliances. An example might be (CLICHE WARNING TO THE MAX) Cat nip.
person Igobymanynames
schedule April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww, that was so sad :,(

The scene was so well written! I love it, yet hate it! Give Aisha a hug for me!

As always, keep up the great work!
person Rez
schedule April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for this story. But it is really in need to be proofreaded. There are mistakes like "Terrans and humans on the same ship?" and too many typos.

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