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April 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another amazing chapter here! Thanks for the little (Well, I say little :P) mention of my second favourite pairing in Outlaw Star (to JimxAisha, of course!).
I love how protective Jim is, it's so cute!
Sorry the review is short, writing from phone!
Just letting you know that you MMD!
I love how protective Jim is, it's so cute!
Sorry the review is short, writing from phone!
Just letting you know that you MMD!
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April 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for more of the good stuff. Oh and if your still looking for it you can find Outlaw Star: Growing Pains on mediaminor.org
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April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
He's becoming terratorial? Thats a mix between cute, sexy and awesome I cant describe! Even though it does make me worry a bit, as Aisha would be a very... desirable mate, and whilst Jim is clever, I doubt his abillity to take out a Ctarl in hand-to-hand! Though, of course, love makes you strong!
The combat was nice, and very realistic (from what I know about naval combat, which admittedly is little), and the death of the general was actually pretty touching. I also look forward to seeing more of Inuyasha, as he seems to be developing pretty damn fast!
Also, despite this being a very Jim x Aisha fic, I love the little bits of Gene x Melfina and Suzuka, as they are so nice together! I'd love to see like a one-shot of them or something. Someone get on that! (R34 and all that :P)
Also, the way it ended, with Jim and Aisha sleeping toether, just rounded off this whole chapter for me, it was so cute!
As always, keep up the great work, and thanks for updating so damn fast!
P.s; Not sure exactly how much of the cat pysiology maps onto Ctarls, but if you rub the base of a cats tail (The underside), its arousing!
...What? I used to be a Vet! You these kind of things! Never thought it'd actually be useful though! XD
The combat was nice, and very realistic (from what I know about naval combat, which admittedly is little), and the death of the general was actually pretty touching. I also look forward to seeing more of Inuyasha, as he seems to be developing pretty damn fast!
Also, despite this being a very Jim x Aisha fic, I love the little bits of Gene x Melfina and Suzuka, as they are so nice together! I'd love to see like a one-shot of them or something. Someone get on that! (R34 and all that :P)
Also, the way it ended, with Jim and Aisha sleeping toether, just rounded off this whole chapter for me, it was so cute!
As always, keep up the great work, and thanks for updating so damn fast!
P.s; Not sure exactly how much of the cat pysiology maps onto Ctarls, but if you rub the base of a cats tail (The underside), its arousing!
...What? I used to be a Vet! You these kind of things! Never thought it'd actually be useful though! XD
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April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmmm, another great chapter here! Loving the mix of sexy and funny, you got it just right here! I must say that the "Hi Mom" scene, even in my imagination, had me trying to contain my laughter! I also gotta say, having a complex guy like Jim reduced to his more base instincts is a great read, It just emphasises how damn good that sex is!
Also, yay, a war is hell plot! I missed those plots, people seem to be going back to a "War for Fun and Profit" Stance on warfare, which, any grunt or officer will tell you, just aint true.
Glad to see that you find my reviews entertaining! Not sure hy youd find them entertaining, seeing as you write such delicious lemon!
Anywhoosle, I look forward to seeing your next chapter!
Also, yay, a war is hell plot! I missed those plots, people seem to be going back to a "War for Fun and Profit" Stance on warfare, which, any grunt or officer will tell you, just aint true.
Glad to see that you find my reviews entertaining! Not sure hy youd find them entertaining, seeing as you write such delicious lemon!
Anywhoosle, I look forward to seeing your next chapter!
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April 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe, don't mention it, after all, you desrve to hear the truth!
But anywhoosle, I must say you had me worried for a second there, with the mention of sexual torture.
First of all, because, whilst I'm into bondage, rape (and torture) is bad shit, and it shouldn't be sexualised! However, the fact that the other characters seemed to think this was a horrific thing stopped me from ranting for a bit. However, if you are planning to do a rape scene, put a disclaimer on it, or you will be ranted at mercilessly! Trust me, I've been there!
Right, onwards and upwards! Aisha! In the Terran uniform?! *Pants*
God that's a sexy mental image!
Also, the bow legged walk and Genes snarkiness made me chuckle a bit, so props for that!
My only little sad point was that this chapter was a little short, but hey, good thing come in little packages! :D
I'll stroke any part of you, ego included, as long as you keep this updated, deal?
Teehee, look forward to more plot, more sex, more hot costumes, and more fun times! Keep up the good work!
But anywhoosle, I must say you had me worried for a second there, with the mention of sexual torture.
First of all, because, whilst I'm into bondage, rape (and torture) is bad shit, and it shouldn't be sexualised! However, the fact that the other characters seemed to think this was a horrific thing stopped me from ranting for a bit. However, if you are planning to do a rape scene, put a disclaimer on it, or you will be ranted at mercilessly! Trust me, I've been there!
Right, onwards and upwards! Aisha! In the Terran uniform?! *Pants*
God that's a sexy mental image!
Also, the bow legged walk and Genes snarkiness made me chuckle a bit, so props for that!
My only little sad point was that this chapter was a little short, but hey, good thing come in little packages! :D
I'll stroke any part of you, ego included, as long as you keep this updated, deal?
Teehee, look forward to more plot, more sex, more hot costumes, and more fun times! Keep up the good work!
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April 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just... Wow!
If this is what you call "completely no plot", I'd love to read some of your plot heavy stuff!
The sex scenes are hot (Even more so as a major catgirl fanboy ;) ), the plot is better than most regular fanfics, there are next to no grammatical or spelling issues, and it is brilliantly put together! Normally I like to atleast nitpick something out of a story, but if I'm honest, the only thing that could be made better in my (subjective and personal) opinion is that the sex is vanilla. Then again, they are a new couple, so it makes a helluva lot of sense!
I cannot wait to read more, and will definitely keep an eye out for any more chapters!
If this is what you call "completely no plot", I'd love to read some of your plot heavy stuff!
The sex scenes are hot (Even more so as a major catgirl fanboy ;) ), the plot is better than most regular fanfics, there are next to no grammatical or spelling issues, and it is brilliantly put together! Normally I like to atleast nitpick something out of a story, but if I'm honest, the only thing that could be made better in my (subjective and personal) opinion is that the sex is vanilla. Then again, they are a new couple, so it makes a helluva lot of sense!
I cannot wait to read more, and will definitely keep an eye out for any more chapters!
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March 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is a very well written story! I'd really like to see a sequel to this, as I enjoyed this more than any story I have read in a long time.
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February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for anouther great chapter, it was awesome and I truly enjoyed it. Are you going to continue this, if so that would be great.
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January 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks, there just aren't enough Jim and Aisha stories. I would have liked to read more but I really enjoyed it.
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January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Im sorry, this is the most badass story I've read in a while, and from my favorite anime as well.
Seriously, it may not be deep or complicated, but it's very funny and quite good, even if its short. I want a 2nd chapter, and a 17th
Seriously, it may not be deep or complicated, but it's very funny and quite good, even if its short. I want a 2nd chapter, and a 17th