rate_review Reviews

You did a pretty decent job at adapting this into words! Heck, some of the descriptions, like Mello's pleasure, seemed a little hotter compared to the pictures themselves! I also like how you described that they were so lost in their bliss that they couldn't talk/think straight, since I thought those were just some mistranslations in the original. Although: I don't remember Mello actually hitting Matt in the beginning of the doujinshi, I wish you'd refer to them as "boyfriend" or "partner" rather than "friend," and kept Matt's "Come on...come..." by the end of their sex scene. But overall, good job!