rate_review Reviews

How very adorable this whole thing is. I was disappointed when I got to the end, and I'm hardly even a fan of Pokemon. I really love how you managed to make it so that everything's taking place in the same world, like snippets of some larger story or something. Most people wouldn't have bothered doing that, but it makes it way more cool. And it's so seamless, which makes it even more impressive. Bravo.

Incidentally, the fifth chapter was my favourite, though it's an eleven-way tie for second.