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Yay, I wasn't feeling good today and seeing you update made me soo happy :)

Love how the story is coming so far and can't wait to see what happens next.

I love that Hakkai has grown stronger and has moved past having Gojyo being the center of his universe. I hope that Sanzo and Gojyo shape up and pull through for our boy. I really like the OC's so far; I have no problem with OCs as long as they are well-written and not Mary Sues, so good job.

I understand why Hakkai never told them about the Merciful Goddess. They'd still think he was a freak for agreeing and would still blame him for participating in hir scheme...

I eagerly check the story every day for updates and was so happy to see daily updates for the past couple days. Please keep them coming! :)

Kudos to you -- I created an aff account just so I could review this story. Please, PLEASE keep the updates coming. It's sooo sad (at least the last few chapters) -- tears were running down my face. I'm not sure why Hakkai can't/won't tell everyone that Kanzeon is involved. They already know what a meddlesome b**** se can be. At first I was convinced the dagger was cursed, but know you have me wondering.

Wow! what an emotion packed chapter! I don't get why Hakkai didn't tell them it was the Merciful Goddess that made him that way? maybe he didn't because everyone was yelling and being violent and he was freaking out so he didn't have a chance. Im happy that Hakkai has Goku to help him out, and Gojou seems willing to listen to Hakkai now with his broken nose. Can't wait for the next chapter

I like reading this story.And wondering if you could email the other versions of chapter 10 so I could see which one I like Best Thank You.

That last chapter was quite emotionally wrenching! You haven't updated and days and only post one chapter? Please post several more to make up for it! ;) I registered so I could comment on this story and beg you for more updates.

I'm sorry, I can't seem to figure out how to do anything on this site other than read stories, haha. If you need a beta primarily for proofreading and cleaning up, I can help you with that. As a fair warning, though, I don't really have beta experience but I would hate to see this story die because you don't feel comfortable with posting chapters that haven't been through a beta. If you're interested, let me know. I can't figure out how to PM you on this site...

I wonder who that street vendor guy is? Hakkai sure kicked some butt! I hope he can still shop at the market lol. When everyone finds out that Hakkai got a bun in the oven the only person who will be happy will be Goku, Gojou and Sano will be angry. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I think it's so sweet how Hakkai is confiding in Goku. While Goku is somewhat childish, he really cares about his friends and wants to help. I'm afraid that Hakkai might be disappointed when he finds out that Gojou's feelings for him might not be as strong as his feelings for Gojou.

You have a great story on hand. You are really showing human emotions as well as the craziness that only happens in the Sayuki world. Great job. I look forward to read the rest of your story.