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O liked it and I loved how you mannaged to do it in a way that agrees with gab

Minor nitpick: In Flight's based on the Unlimited Blade Works route, good end. The desperate threesome to recharge Saber enough to face Berserker only happened in the Fate route, so it really shouldn't have been mentioned in this story. Given UBW route, Shirou already deflowered Rin in game (she wasn't too pleased with the experience if I remember right), and any action with Saber would have had to take place after the events of the game, so I'm not too sure about the inexperience at deflowering would still fit (although, I suppose 2 does count as inexperience still, especially since he messed up the first time)...

Still, that's a minor thing... The story was quite good otherwise, and it fits the events of chapter 23 quite well...

I have no words. Other than very good and funny in all the right places compliments Gabriel Blessing's "In Flight" on fanfiction dot net perfectly. Looking to seeing if you do more when approriate.