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I'd like to see this continued. After all that nicely written build up she didn't lose her virginity, It left me feeling a bit unforfilled and wanting more. Maybe she gets some sort of knock out drug and use it on Misato or finds Kensuke's video camera sees him and Toji doing some experimetal gay stuff on it and decides to blackmail Kensuke into releaving her desires.

I would definitely like to see a part two. This isnt a niche you see done(well anyway) very often...

Very enjoyable reading with a great theme and a nice interpretation of Asuka. I agree more with your handling of her than with many others that I've read; the hot emotions and the conflict are all there without turning Asuka into a basket case, psycho bitch, or weakling. That's very rare and impressive. I don't know if you plan to do more writing about she and Shinji but I would be glad to read it if you do.

I am impressed! Saw the pic, a while ago, so i know what you're refering to.
As to the story itself; Well done! That urgency and lust comes over perfectly, just making me Want her to do it, to placate her needs and mine as well.
I'd love to see rei's expression when she sees it in the showers...;)
You should definitley publish more! Keep writing and I'll keep reviewing!
Yours sincerely,
Henryjamesthefifth