rate_review Reviews

I 'think' you had something nice going on here, but then it seemed like you sped through it, slowed down, and then sped through it again. Also, when you referred to Cell, you began referring to Cell as an "it" then later a "he". You missed a lot of words, too, but for a general concept of a rapefic between Cell and Jupiter, you did okay. :) Definitely room for improvement. Just don't try to rush things and then decide against it mid way through then speed up again. It really loses the reader.

Sexy piece. Would like to see more of Jupiter being taken, having sex while pregnant etc. You could bring in more characters as well.
SailorNemesis