rate_review Reviews

I lost all ability to take this seriously at this line:

"So, dad passed away, I see... What happened next?"

I actually started laughing there. I was trying to take it somewhat seriously before, since I've written weirder things, but...man, this is obviously a comedy, and it's a strange one...but yeah, you've got some very funny lines here. And ending it with ice cream...I mean...wow.