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for The Trainer's Journey

by reddragon

person Anon
schedule October 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You're sneaking in a little plot with your porn here, but it's moving along nicely. I wonder if counting down Pokemon really works? And a beedrill... my evil little heart is all aflutter! :D
person Anon
schedule October 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
::grins:: Ah, yes. Long suffering aides who invariably get the clothing sizes wrong in all the right ways. But no pidgey pie? And here I was feeling peckish.

Nicely done, and not too gory at all!
person SkySan27
schedule October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well uh.... fuck. The start of the chapter was sweet and I'm glad you didn't turn Oak into a 100% pedo. He enjoyed listening to the act in the first chapter and I think he would do that for any trainer. The second chapter was a good battle, but it was nothing that I expected. How twisted will our young trainer get, and how crazy will she get as well? Looking forward to the next chapter, and good work so far.
person Anon
schedule October 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Superlative use of purple prose. And why, oh why, does it not surprise me in the least that Professor Oak was listening in?

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