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But when IS next time, I wonder?;) This is a very good fic, I really like your portrayal of Raoul as a stubborn, domineering creature in this, in a way his passion for Katze is risking far more here than Iason's for Riki ever did, because at least he could say that in truth Riki DID belong to him, and not someone else... and also Katze is portrayed very well here, both his more independent, stubborn side and his submissive, hopeless side are in there and are being combined in a very credible way :) So why hasn't this story been updated? Cause this story is awesome!:D Pls let there be a continuation of this story?:)

Had read this in the past but lost the link. So glad about finding it again. Introducing a friend to Ai no Kushiba and it's fan fiction following. This was one of the stories I knew would be enjoyable.

(5) I'm amazed Katze was able to keep a level head for as long as he did, faced with a looming Blondie that's no easy feat. Curious how Raoul says he will teach Katze, makes me wonder aside from the pets he really shouldn't have firsthand knowledge but then again I am putting this down to Blondie attitude and the thought that they wouldn't be anything but great regardless of actual experience.

Honestly Blondies aren't particularly likeable but I'm not sure Raoul cares at this point as long as he gets what he wants but I do wonder how it will affect him if Katze continues to treat him the same way. Also as Katze does better in his job what if Iason decides to send him out on trips or has him stay at his flat. It makes me wonder overtime how Raoul's going to handle not being able to do as he pleases when he pleases. For now he can say he owns Katze but he has no control over his schedule or actions, how long before the frustration sets in.

The whole concept of control and ownership in this world always leaves me fighting between loving these guys and hating them for what it does to all the people around them. It's going to be interesting to see how all of them function within the roles that each of them are set in. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter :)

(4) I couldn't help but think about how young Katze is when all this is going on, talk about feeling alone and isolated. He really doesn't have anyone to turn to which has got to make the situation with Raoul all the more frightening. He may have seen and done quite a few things and be smart beyond his years but it doesn't change the fact that when up against a Blondie with attitude there's not much you can do. Unfortunately he can't just tell Raoul to bugger off (even if he wants to) and now the Blondie is in his house with a plan.

This is quite the setup you've got and I love the characterizations of all the guys, I can't wait to see what happens next.^^ I'm also curious to see if Iason figures out what is going on and what his reaction will be. Nice update, I can't wait for more :)

Love the story! Please continue, your characters are great!

quiet evil of you to leave it there. cant wait to see what all Katze was instructed to do. also i am loving the possesive Raoul. Too often people make him out to be far too passive! plus I am loving the way you have Katze portrayed too!

Also have you seen the new vid that came out, it was worth the wait! The new art keeps true to the original but is very much modernized at the same time.

Can't wait to read more of your work, this pairing is one of my favorite, so I am always checking in on it. Don't keep me waiting too long okay! Thanks for the great update!

more please! so good!

well, you certainly have my curiosity piqued! i would love to see more of this.

Great beginning ! Thank you very much for a new exclusive story about my favorite couple !
It's good that Katze is whole again, cos in the stories where he's never repaired, I always feel sorry for him !
As for Raoul, cool and domineering as always ! Can't wait to see what he has in mind for the black market dealer !

(2) I know at this point Katze is still thought of as no more than a servant but I still can't help but feel that Raoul is definitely crossing the line here. But realistically what could Katze do because while we know that later him and Iason seemed to have a relationship that was more than merely master/slave, it would have taken many years to get there. At this point would Iason even care about what Raoul was doing as long as Katze could do his work. It's also interesting that after such a short time Raoul is already showing signs of jealousy. Which means that he would hate the thought I had that maybe Riki could be the one Katze could try things out on ;) (that's if Riki's even around at this time)

I am glad we seem to be sticking with this time, I had started to wonder if maybe ch1 was just a look back and then we would skip ahead but I'm looking forward to seeing all these guys try to figure out just where they fit and how they feel about it. I also liked that glimpse of some of the things that Katze had to do in order to establish his control and how hard he had to work on himself and not just the business.

Sorry for rambling on (i do tend to do that^^) but it was a really good chapter and I can't wait for the next one :)