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April 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this is sweet stuff..keep it coming...
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January 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Delicoius, so weird and erotic in a very strange bdsm but not. Also very funny. Ouch! Super turn on! Give me an update soon!
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January 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Took some while to get around, and I laughed for a lot in chapter 3. That sexy space girl just gets the worst sexual luck. Can I make a request? How about some kind of miniature creatures, like Gulliver kind of thing? I'd love to see tiny intelligent creatures explore her. Maybe even worship her needy part with offerings, or even excatings it while going in? Okay I admit I have a weird fetish. Sorry if its too weird but I thought maybe considering the type of fiction it is.
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December 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love the whole genital orientated comedy! This is so damn cool, funny and very oddly erotic considering how it's done. This is one weird story but worth the read for its originality!
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December 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I made an account just to review this fic lol. I find it amazing and entertaining. Fantastic first chapter and a very solid start with the humor. Who knew that it could have been this good. Well done you guys, I really love the ship.
Now I'm going to tremble and go cower in the corner from his fic and put on a chastity belt too while I'm at it. Poor Z I hope she's not too beaten, nah on second though as seen as its so funny to see her get it I want more! >_<
Now I'm going to tremble and go cower in the corner from his fic and put on a chastity belt too while I'm at it. Poor Z I hope she's not too beaten, nah on second though as seen as its so funny to see her get it I want more! >_<
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December 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this chapter *gulps breaking a sweat* That poor Z, she really did get it. Ah well lets hope things get better for her, well not really its just funny seeing things happen to her. I can see this fic start to get a big following once people start reading it as its packed with humor, laughs and most importantly comical concepts that have not been utilized giving it an overall originality which beckons attention. I laughed so hard with the whole starship John gag.
Considering your co-author is more gay then straight I'm fairly certain that people wont take offense as its done in good humor and the characters are just taking it out on each other. Lets see where the journey goes for the poor girl. I think you should add a comedy and humor tag to your fic as its mostly a comedy sketch, hmmm sexual comedy of course.
Considering your co-author is more gay then straight I'm fairly certain that people wont take offense as its done in good humor and the characters are just taking it out on each other. Lets see where the journey goes for the poor girl. I think you should add a comedy and humor tag to your fic as its mostly a comedy sketch, hmmm sexual comedy of course.