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Hahahaha its so funny! The funny partis ash never told him the guys name XD. Nice fic.

That was adorably charming. I loved the dialogue between Ash and Tory it was sweet and it was so easy to picture the pair sitting and talking like Ash has done so many times with his friends thought the series. It was also refreshing to see Ash without Pikachu, it allowed Ash to explore himself as an individual and not part of a team. I also enjoyed that they didn't just have sex, the scene played out so perfectly without it. Great job!