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for A Kiss Can Be Deadly

by Alyndrya

person Brandy
schedule April 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!! :) :) :) I can't wait for the rest. when are you gonna updte? please update soon.
person Saber
schedule March 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow that chapter was amazing, though I am slightly disappointed that Seras doesn't believe Alucard. However, I guess it all goes together in the end. Hopefully she realizes that he wants her as his mate soon
person Ludifer
schedule February 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is amazing, I read sending over the edge too but was too hooked on finding more of your AXS writing that my mind woulnd't settle to write a review :P sorry.
Well here is a review of both for ya, they are both sooooo good, they totally draw me in and I can't stop reading for hours, the way you write keeps me enthralled with your stories. Very well done :).

Hope to see the sequel of sending over the edge after this as the end got me angry not at you mind you, just I wanna see what was going to happen next, ah well. And on this, well finally she accepts, ah she knew what she wanted all along, just those niggling fears and thoughts are there at first, espcially if you aren't that confident with yourself, aww I wanna pat her on the head but on second thought I don't think I want Alucard to tear my arm off XD.

Looking forward to next chapter!
schedule February 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Man that chapter 6 was amazing, I can't wait to see the actual mating scene and see what all goes down afterwards. ^_^ Great job
schedule February 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just finished chapter 5 and boy oh boy I cannot wait till the next one is released ^_^ Keep up the good work
person Sayasugizo
schedule February 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So there's some repeated stuff that you use alot so I'm abit annoyed with it to be honest. I wish Seras demon came out more often. And this is a long ass party o.O when is the party gonna be over?
person PalmtreeFreak
schedule February 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Really I just love how sexy you write Alucard. Also it amuses me how silly Seras is in actually realizing that he really wants her, but hey, if she did then it really wouldn't be much of a story then.

Keep up the good work. I enjoy reading things from you. You're a great writer and I can't wait to read more.
person Sayasugizo
schedule February 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love chapter 4. please upload he next chapter soon!
person April
schedule January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like the tone of this story and the dierection it is heading so far with the first chapter. It's very different from 'Sending Over The Edge' and I enjoy the two different perspectives of the romance that can happen between Alucard and Seras. One thing I would like to comment on is that sometimes the sentences and even paragraphs can seem repetitive. You may have seras say something like, Alucard is sexy five differnt ways which is fine, but you put it all either in the same line or one sentence after another. That's not to say you did that in this piece it's just an exapmle of what you might so when explaining the characters thoughts, and it can get distracting.
person Tina_21
schedule January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please please PLEASE hurry an write another chapter, I absolutely LOVE this story and can't wait to read more!!!!

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