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for Prison of Flesh

by Amitakartok_The_Writer

person MoreMonkeythanMan
schedule September 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'd really love to see more of Rei and Gendo sexscenes. You should add more of them, like he continues to see her for a week after he actually had sex with her. And during them he kisses her and tells Rei all the things she wants to hear. Stuff like "You're mine" and "I need you", which drives her wild. And perhaps more on that conception and what she feels about it.

You can even have Rei doing other characters.
Perhaps a side story about an aging UN inspector, who Rei seduces and sleeps with because Gendo wanted to bribe him and have blackmail material to keep his silence. A Rei and fuyutsuki lemon could work in this too, there's Rei and a teacher or some senior student who has the hots for her. Anyway I hope you continue this or write another story like it involving Rei.
schedule April 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Jimmony Jilickers! An update from someone!
Glad you updated this, I hate this pairing in romance fics but since this is pretty much just sex you get a thumbs up from me. It would be nice if it longer somehow.
person dylanredefined
schedule February 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I thought this was very good.Utter filth the idea that rei is a willing slave is very well done.
person asap
schedule February 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Despite being one of the obvious settings for an evangelion hardcore adult fic you don't see too many Rei/Gendo scenes out there. Probally because not many like Gendo (myself included), but I liked the way Rei was written as some ready and willing slave which in ways she was. This almost has a Netorare vibe to it, Evangelion adult fiction could always do with more of the Netorare Genre (specificlly semi-realistic ones were Asuka cheats on Shinji with some guy). The storys much better than your other eva fic and hope to see more chapters.

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