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for Our Beginning

by Eliza_Kitty

schedule May 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more! Love this story!
schedule December 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay! So glad that they are back together and finally admitting their true feelings to each other. I love that little glimpse into Tsume's past to explain why he is afraid to feel. Nice! Keep it coming!
schedule September 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say, "I LOVE WOLFS RAIN!!!" Thank you so much for writing a continuation!!! Your story has been very moving, and I just can't get enough of it! Please upload soon! Oh and I was thinking for the chapter "Goodbye" The remake song, "What Hurts The Most" by Cascade fits it perfectly! Oh and the chapter were Tsume is thinking of Tobe while on the run, I forget what it was called, all I could hear in my head was, "All I Need" by Within Temptation. And, I love music and how it fits with certain stories, When Tobe was being "raped" by Tsume the song "What Have You Done Now" Also by Within Temptation!
Please keep writing because I can't wait to read more! Thanks for being outside of the box as well!!!! Oh and the scene when Tobe says he is leaving, "Always Be My Baby" by Mariha Carey! I always misspell her name! ^_^
schedule August 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! I just love a suspenseful ending to a chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next!
schedule August 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay! New chapter! I'm so happy that they found each other again. Stay together this time, dammitt!
I follow you on deviantART too (naturechild02)and the art goes so well with the story. Keep em both coming!
person Cwbs
schedule July 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm a huge wolfs rain fan, I love that some one is going to start it agian. It was a great start but I'm a little confused as to who gran is and to why toboy thinks he's a boy. I'm going to keep reading , but keep in midw it's been a while sine wolf rain fans have seen an episode so make sure to explane who any of the old charicters are just to Remind the fans of who the are. Pleases and thank you , and great start
person Cwbs
schedule July 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please the uncut would be much better
schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow, totally did not see the no humans part coming. Awesome story so far though. I hope you continue writing it. I'll continue reading. ^_^
schedule June 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The hopping back and forth in time is fun and keeps the story interesting. I'm glad that Toboe has found a pack to hang with. He may grow up a bit with them but I hope that eventually he will get back on the road to paradise. And hopefully, Tsume is somewhere down that road.
schedule June 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So Tsume is setting off for a journey of his own now too, haha.

I didn't even have much time to comment, but I just had to drop by to say that I absolutely loved that comparison of Toboe to a peach - truly beautiful, even Emerson himself would have applauded you. Can't wait to see what happens next!

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