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for Our Beginning

by Eliza_Kitty

schedule May 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh, the cliffhangerrrrrr! the tension is killing me... I wonder what's going on with Tsume... So many questions! Can't wait for the next chapter - keep up the awesome work!
schedule May 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
noooooooooooo *sob*

On the other hand, I'm really happy that you updated, I already began to think you've abandoned the story... Never mind me, I'm just a pessimist sometimes. Anyhow, I really loved the scene in the bath, but even though I expected some kind of a sad ending (I mean 'goodbye' never indicated anything good, eh?), I was still sad when I reached the bottom. I hope they'll come together again in the end <3
schedule May 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
More please! It's dark but not that dark. Can't wait to see how Tsume proves his love for Toboe.
schedule April 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story. I've discovered it today and was smitten by it immediatelly. Right now, I'm at chapter 11, but what you said in the end intrigued me - so there's an uncensored version, if I understood correctly? I'd love to read it, if you could provide me with a link, of course.

Thanks in advance, and thanks for the wonderful story. I hope my email shows, if not: mykonosparadise2@gmail

(Now onto the next chapter, haha)
schedule April 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aww, man - please ignore my previous comment. I should have read the next chapter before actually posting, but I guess it was excitement and anticipation. Well anyway, I could drop another comment while I'm at it. To be honest, it's been a loooong time since I read a scene as good as this one. Wonderful. I don't know what the next chapters will bring, but I enjoyed these first 11 ones immensely.
schedule March 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
More, more!
schedule March 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love to find stories up here that actually have a plot! More!
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schedule March 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. I can't wait to see what happens next. 
schedule March 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow i was so into this chapter i was sad when it ended please put out another chapter i cant wait to read more and tsume and toboe are the cutest couple out there so thumbs up on this story and keep up the awesome work
schedule February 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Boy toy was a cute chapter but it felt a bit rushed. The grammar and sentence structure weren't so hot and the details seemed repetitive. But I love how Toboe waited for him everyday, just hoping to see his face. Super sweet. Ready for more!

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