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by Amitakartok_The_Writer

schedule March 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Being the original idea holder, you obviously though about this for quite some time. Its well-written, full of color and much much more realistic than my version. So you win ;)

I do wonder though if Rei's stimulated nipples would show up on Ritsuko's jealousy-fed examination of her. Meh, I'm blabbering. So thanks for sharing and Keep writing the good stuff!

Yours sincerely,
Henryjamesthefifth

as a side note; PLEASE do the Touji/Horaki sister foursome! i can't wait to read it!

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