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August 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story a lot. It was well thought out and the situation could realistically happen of course, With kaitou Kid being as popular as he is.
The very end felt a little awkward for me for some reason. It may be the repetitive nature? I am not sure how I would change it though. But other than that one thing it was perfect, at least in my opinion :) I hope your write more like this.
The very end felt a little awkward for me for some reason. It may be the repetitive nature? I am not sure how I would change it though. But other than that one thing it was perfect, at least in my opinion :) I hope your write more like this.