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From what I can see, this story could have  probably been posted on  Fanfiction net without too mch trouble.  You would have gotten more reviews most likely anyway which may have led you to finishing this interesting fic.

I'm glad you still updating this. I only have a rough idea about whats going on, Maya and Shinji on the moon stranded and trying to survive and her remembering putting the him and the other pilots in some sort of breeding progam that they don't have memory of because she helped erase them. Interesting take on NGE hope you keep going with it.

You,ve made the commander and Nerv science staff seem even more cold and inhuman(wonder what Yui's like).
Ha! Shinji and Maya have space cabin fever. There's a lot of personality conditioning in this, I don't know how much if any was in the original anime but you've given me somthing to think about. How much free will do these pilots really have? If their every action and personality disorder is a product of the Commanders orders?

Now I see why this is here. it's angsty which I love, and has sex which I also love. Can't wait to see what happens next. I'd like to see a scene with Rei or her tank of clones, or a bad male technition taking advantage of a drugged up, sexualy stimulated Asuka, or a male technition taking a trip down to Rei's tank of clones for some easy pleasure, swimming around the tank naked while the mindless giggling clones have their way with him. But thats just my perverted side's hope, whatever you do will be fine.

I tried reveiwing this before and the site didn't let me. first let me just thank you for adding a new story to this site (it's been a slow year). Hope you continue this soon , the way you describe the angst an drama scenes is interesting and unique