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schedule November 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 review:

The nazis certainly are monsters placed within human shells. It's comforting to know that most are deceased in this day and age.

How could they do such things to so many innocent people?

Although I know Dialga II somewhat, it still surprises me to see a Dialga being sympathetic like that.

And might I say, I was rather angry when I saw the part where the nazi raped Kelula. Also, I was happy when I saw Dialga ending the nazis lives. :)

Thank god, Dialga got her out of there before it was too late. Although I am curious on why he took her to Sinnoh.

Good job on the chapter-
schedule August 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1 review:

Whether I see them in videos or read about them in stories, my anger burns like a star in the sky every time I think of the nazis (unless they're getting tortured or killed, of course). I hate them more than the political adversaries of my group.

The way Melia was tortured...I feel so bad for her. Those nazis who were hurting her deserve to die deaths so morbid and painful that only God could have the vocabulary to describe the scale of it.

I wonder, is this a one-shot story, or will there be another chapter? If that's the case, update when possible.

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