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August 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Story was amazing cant wait for the next chapter especially with rei even though Saeko is my favorite for Takashi also you should make a chapter with Rika then a orgy chapter
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December 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. I can't wait of the next chapter, so keep up the good work!
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August 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OH God, that was hot! I can't wait for the next chapter, Rei is my favorite girl of the group and I can just imagine how Takashi's gonna bang her, especially since she's his ex.
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August 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yes! I finally found the review button!
Nice job. Saeko is definately my favorite of the series, and you did marvelous with her. The other two were not bad by any means, in fact, your quite A good erotica writer.
Fun Fact: 24 hrs ago, I didn't know anything about H.O.T.D. I've now watched all of the first season, and trying to gorge myself on fanfictions about it.
Nice job. Saeko is definately my favorite of the series, and you did marvelous with her. The other two were not bad by any means, in fact, your quite A good erotica writer.
Fun Fact: 24 hrs ago, I didn't know anything about H.O.T.D. I've now watched all of the first season, and trying to gorge myself on fanfictions about it.
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June 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
*slowly clapping* Stunning. Absolutely stunning. You have definitely exceeded expectations with Takashi and Saeko's encounter. Well done.
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June 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
At long last. Chapter 3 was definitely worth the wait. Awesome work.
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June 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hot stuff with Saeko. Good to see you back, I had nearly given up hope. Looking forward to your next update on the Final Fantasy story as well. It's Paine's turn to get caught!
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June 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Its great to see you writing again.
This was the best chapter by far, in my opinion. You certainly did a good job making this one worth the wait.
Aside from the great lemon, what I like here are the suductive and passionate lines Saeko has. Hope to see more of her in later chapters!
Keep up the good work, I look forward to more!
This was the best chapter by far, in my opinion. You certainly did a good job making this one worth the wait.
Aside from the great lemon, what I like here are the suductive and passionate lines Saeko has. Hope to see more of her in later chapters!
Keep up the good work, I look forward to more!
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June 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Definitely hot, was wondering if Kohta would get any more action though? I was hoping he'd get Rei first or something, seems kind of a downer that he'd get majority sloppy seconds, lol.
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March 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this story I would love to read what u have in store for the other two girls.