rate_review Reviews

Woah.i take back what i sid earlier..this plot is awesome.Forgive me.Sometimes i get jumpy.Im loving the plot now.Waiting for the next chapter.

I see you got some writing skills and you are pretty good...but i dont mean to be rude and i dont want to offend you or anything but ur plot sucks...pokemon eating pokemon...pokemon cant use ovens or switches...and how in the hells name can a umbreon defeat a arcanine let alone eat it??arcanine have extreme speed and the regular size of a jumbo...but i saw ur writing is pretty good...so make a good plot and then write the story...it wud be epic...looking forward to ur new stories..