rate_review Reviews

I really enjoy this story I was wondering if it was abandoned at all I mean im not a writer but I would really appreciate it if you could continue this series I would love to see where it goes from here especially when I love all the characters of one piece

This is my favorite story in the one piece section. I really love how you have altered Luffys personality to fit his Devil fruit more and the way how it still feels like him. I hope you go as far as you can in the series, if not maybe just have chapters to show how scenes or scenarios from the show/manga would have gone differently with this luffy. And thank you for not just making the last chapter just smut. I enjoy the smut for what it is, but I am truly in love with your version of luffy and his flirtations, interactions, and his powers. You managed to make him more than just sex and i appreciate the creativity you put in to this story. I find it really cool how you describe each characters auras and I found Usopps incredibly cute and I think about his character in a different fashion. Zoro's sexual fetish for swords and such makes me smile and Nami feels true to the show so far. I'm curious what you will do with her. And finally I cant wait to see what you do for Sanji and his quirks, hes my favorite of the crew out of the first 5. Please continue this story.

are you going to keep going with this fiction? I was/am really holding out for the Sanji/Fullbody chapter

I'm so obsessed with this story right now. I love everything about it, the humor, your writing style, ooc characterization ( which somehow still fits their characters, oddly). I can't wait for the next chapters~

I actually find this story quite funny so far, I am little scared of Alvida. Considering how 'obsessive' her canon character was, I don't want to think about how much she'll be with this Luffy.

I'm actually surprised that I'm enjoying this story. Its certainly interesting, I'll give you that. Although right now I'm wondering how Luffy's meeting with Hancock would go...

Sure the deletion was random? I saw someone who thought that their deletion was random and they had broken some vague rule.

Now, that said, a good story. I skipped over the yaoi parts (squicks me bad) but the rest of the story was awesome.