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for Sparks Will Fly

by EllieRamsey

person Ikana
schedule June 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I should have reviewd you the first time I read your stories. It was only a few days before you uploaded Sparks Will Fly that I told a friend of mine about The Penalty for Betrayal AND I WANTED TO SHOW IT TO HER SO BADLY and I found it was gone D:
And I think about the "aversion therapy - mafia style" quite often as well, because RAWR <3 And the heartbreaking moment when Hibari had been running away and Dino right after him and then when he came back and Hibari just THOUGHT he had won!

Argh! Sorry for retelling old stuff xD

At first when I read about the skills of a seventh hell I was like "wow... that's lame..." That opinion stuck with me until the end. Until it fell off at the very last sentence. That was when I began to squeal! I mean, so much ca happen! The charm's power could wear off during Mukuro's doings and that would be a point where he would be so royally screwed!
(Lol you must think, I'm a random weirdo who's completely out of touch with reality... but I love the way you write and I'm so happy about your creativity and that there is still someone out there who hasn't forgotten about reborn!)
schedule March 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It's a shame you took down Penalty For Betrayal. That was my favourite KHR fic to go back and reread. But I understand am glad you're writing a sequel. I hope you do continue this since your fics are the ones I really enjoy revisting in the KHR fandom and because I really do love the way you write the interaction between Muroko and Hibari.

If you do end up updating this fic I'd love it if you could let me know at incessantdarkness@gmail.com. Thanks in advance!

- Id
person Kitt_C
schedule October 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Back again! Looking forward to this :)

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