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August 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea here, but you need to look at your grammar/spelling at little. Your have a lot of words that are spelled correctly, but are wrong in context. An example would be at the end of the battle with Thunder. Syaoran says Sakura barely defeated Thunder, but you have it spelt barley, as in the grain. Also, with Meling and Syaoran, Li is actually their family name, not the other way around like you have it.
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September 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great to see you decided to update this as well. It's a bit "too soft" in my opinion, but still nice to read and it's always good to have more Card Captor Sakura fanfiction around here. Hope you get the inspiration to keep doing more chapters!
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April 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i like this story. there is not that many cardcaptor fics around these days and for the government worker id say Yoh since he would be an extra help with the clowcard spirits
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December 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I vote for Rika getting back together with Terada, although I don't want to screw over Kaho in the process (this IS a harem fic, after all).
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November 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
... I've been waiting for something like this for so long, I'm eager to see just how Sakura will be required to seal the cards in this naughty universe... as well as all the sexual bits of fun she runs into... as I have a feeling she might end up taking quite a bit after her mother, kukuku. Looking forward to reading more of this as time goes on, Keep it up!
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November 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nice action filled chapter, plus we learn a certain Chinese stud is getting busy with his cousin, lol. I'm curious to see how different he'll be... would be fun to see him focus on trying to get the clow cards and score with all the girls with Magical potential... given they all have the biggest breasts it'll be easy for him to figure out which to pick lol.
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November 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
u should make a syaoran harem, so all the girls fall for him, after all he already got meiling as his first by how that second chapter went, though wish there were smut scenes, but yeah totes makes a syaoran harem his totally hot!!
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November 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
oh here a thought, sorry was just thinking about it, since illusions shows the future, u could make a huge harem smut scene with everyone doing it with syaoran...lol sorry love cardcap fic with syaoran having a harem, but yeah if u make all the girls fall and are attached to him u could do this
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November 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So far so good. Why not have Syaoran have both Rika and Naoko - he seduces the former, then the latter, then cons the both of them to have a three-way. Then when meiling shows up 4-way.