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While I'd normally never complain about a fic that has a horny Nami and Robin constantly walking around naked and going at it, I feel like you're missing some of the true potential of this relationship. Its mainly from one aspect really: Robin's Devil Fruit Powers. Its been three chapters and you have yet to make use of Robin's Devil Fruit Powers. You know, that ability that allows her to sprout body parts anywhere she wants. Robin's powers have so much kinky potential and it's a shame that you don't use them.

Here's a couple idea... Robin brings her hand down to Nami's pussy to finger it, then she sprouts a mouth on her palm and licks her with her hand.

With some extra hands you could have Robin constantly fondling Nami and paying extra attention to those 'huge breasts'.

And if you want to go this route, you could turn Robin into the Dom and she could use her arms to restrain Nami so she can do whatever she wants to her. Then have Nami come back and stick her ClimaTact in her girlfriend's pussy and give her a special kind of electric shock.

Here's a final, more specific suggestion, in chapter 2, you had Nami bend Robin over and eat her ass then you had them turn it around into a sixty-nine. Not necessary. Post-Time Skip Robin can practically clone herself. Nami could have kept Robin bent over and Robin could have grown a second Robin out of the ground behind Nami and had her turn it onto a train/chain of sorts as she ate Nami out from behind.

All I'm saying is, there's a lot more creative potential when it comes having Nico Robin in a sex scene. It would be a shame if you didn't use it. Maybe there's the whole issue of Nami only wanting to play with 'the real Robin' but Robin feels and experiences everything that her extra limbs and clones do so its not like they're just cheap imitations.

Anyway, I hope I gave you some good ideas for future installments. Keep up the good work.

Quite the little gem you've written here. The One Piece section has been surprisingly devoid of yuri but you've remedied that.

I'd can't wait for the next chapter, try having nami use her climatac or robin use her powers.
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Pretty fun story. I know what you mean about a lack of yuri stories for shonen shows. This is common for most such shows, only Bleach has a significant number of yuri tales. It's all about the fans who are attracted to particular genres. Hope to see more, especially with Shirahoshi and Sandersonia. Very glad you did not shave them, I am so sick of that style.

Sniff Thank you for starting this trend I'm so tired of all the Yaoi and I think it about time a females get the attention they deserve. Love the chapter can't wait for the next!