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November 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
great story! I like the inventiveness and the romanticism. keep it up!
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October 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the tentacle dick thing. Haven't seen that done yet ;)
You must write more of this, you know. You've got some good ideas, and you have an excellent sense of description.
Using "I'm" instead of "I am", "You're" instead of "You are" will make it feel less formal, though.
You must write more of this, you know. You've got some good ideas, and you have an excellent sense of description.
Using "I'm" instead of "I am", "You're" instead of "You are" will make it feel less formal, though.