rate_review Reviews

As I've said before Good Sir, please add more chapters.

Loved the story. It has a good pace to it and the scene itself is very hot. There are some problems though. Characterization is a little bit off. It's not big because you have to bend the characters a little, since on their own they'll just drift apart as the show demonstrated. With that said, however, Asuka is just too fast to accept things. She'd offer more resistance in my opinion, even if she wanted things to happen. She just has too much pride, to go along this smoothly. But it's a minor thing. Hope to see more of this story. The kids seriously deserve some good things to happen to them.

That was pretty fun idea. Taking into account Asuka personality, hope to see her more dominating in next chapters (with whips, bondage and so on) or at least teasing Shinji in test plugsuit)