Angel Tears
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Category:
+. to F › Detective Conan/Case Closed
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
2
Views:
2,180
Reviews:
4
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
Disclaimer:
I do not own Detective Conan - Case Closed, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
Chapter 2
Chapter 2
Disclaimer: Still don’t own anything.
Hrtofdrkns: thank you so much for the review and actually, as most girls who have reached a certain age should know, fresh blood that hasn’t had a lot of time to soak into the cloth will come out really well with peroxide, you know that stuff that your parents used on your scraped knees when you were little.
Carla: thanks a lot for the great review!
Chapter 2:
Something’s not right. I can’t say exactly what it is but I have a really weird feeling. Urg, okay, I am a famous detective so figuring out what is going on in my own home should be cake, right? Alright Kogoro, look at the clues. Umm, oh yeah the brat has been having accidents almost every night for a week or so and when his sheets come out of the wash they smell really weird like maybe peroxide or some other chemical like that. And come to think of it, he has been acting kind of weird as of late. He used to have to put his two cents in about everything, but now you can’t seem to get two words out of him. Oh and just the other night at dinner he gave his entire plate of food to me and excused himself to bed, at six o’clock! Yeah, now that I look at all of these little details I can see that something I definitely up with the kid.
As I walk into the office there he is watching TV, actually now that I look closer it looks more like he is looking right through the TV, not even watching the cartoon. To test it, I flip the channel on him. He doesn’t even bat an eye. Another test:
“ Move it squirt, I wanna watch TV.”
Without a word he gets up and goes straight to his room, weird he would’ve normally fought with all his might to secure his spot. Actually I don’t really mind this, I get my TV back and more food and a quiet house to come home to. The brat has actually changed for the better, so why mess with a good thing. I mean if he doesn’t want to eat then I just get more, right. And if he doesn’t wanna watch TV then kudos to him, I don’t like him touching my TV anyway. After all what real problems could a kid his age have. He probably just misses his parents or got into a fight with his little friends.
A/N: Uhh… first of all I want to say sorry for taking so long but I kind of forgot that I had a story going. Second of all, I want to know what I can do to make this story better cause this chapter was really short but I really didn’t know what to say.(Yeah I am inarticulate sometimes) So please give me some ideas to make this chapter better/longer or maybe ideas for future chapters?
Disclaimer: Still don’t own anything.
Hrtofdrkns: thank you so much for the review and actually, as most girls who have reached a certain age should know, fresh blood that hasn’t had a lot of time to soak into the cloth will come out really well with peroxide, you know that stuff that your parents used on your scraped knees when you were little.
Carla: thanks a lot for the great review!
Chapter 2:
Something’s not right. I can’t say exactly what it is but I have a really weird feeling. Urg, okay, I am a famous detective so figuring out what is going on in my own home should be cake, right? Alright Kogoro, look at the clues. Umm, oh yeah the brat has been having accidents almost every night for a week or so and when his sheets come out of the wash they smell really weird like maybe peroxide or some other chemical like that. And come to think of it, he has been acting kind of weird as of late. He used to have to put his two cents in about everything, but now you can’t seem to get two words out of him. Oh and just the other night at dinner he gave his entire plate of food to me and excused himself to bed, at six o’clock! Yeah, now that I look at all of these little details I can see that something I definitely up with the kid.
As I walk into the office there he is watching TV, actually now that I look closer it looks more like he is looking right through the TV, not even watching the cartoon. To test it, I flip the channel on him. He doesn’t even bat an eye. Another test:
“ Move it squirt, I wanna watch TV.”
Without a word he gets up and goes straight to his room, weird he would’ve normally fought with all his might to secure his spot. Actually I don’t really mind this, I get my TV back and more food and a quiet house to come home to. The brat has actually changed for the better, so why mess with a good thing. I mean if he doesn’t want to eat then I just get more, right. And if he doesn’t wanna watch TV then kudos to him, I don’t like him touching my TV anyway. After all what real problems could a kid his age have. He probably just misses his parents or got into a fight with his little friends.
A/N: Uhh… first of all I want to say sorry for taking so long but I kind of forgot that I had a story going. Second of all, I want to know what I can do to make this story better cause this chapter was really short but I really didn’t know what to say.(Yeah I am inarticulate sometimes) So please give me some ideas to make this chapter better/longer or maybe ideas for future chapters?