Subjugation
folder
Death Note › General
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
2
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1,985
Reviews:
8
Recommended:
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Currently Reading:
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Category:
Death Note › General
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
2
Views:
1,985
Reviews:
8
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
Disclaimer:
I do not own Death Note, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
Notes and such
Here’s the additional paragraph or two that was to go at the end. It would have been attached but I couldn’t find a way to end the story if I DID attach it – so it’s relegated to being here instead! :
The task force found him like that, hunched over L’s body, surrounded by tissues which they assumed had been used to stem Raito’s tears. No one mentioned a thing, wanting to spare the boy the embarrassment and Matsuda quickly cleared them up.
Yagami-san laid a hand gently on his son’s shoulder, surprised when Raito started violently, letting out a choked noise. He stared down at Raito’s face, his son’s eyes red-rimmed and watery as he twisted his head to look up at his father.
“There was nothing you could have done, son. We all knew the risk, Ryuuzaki even more so then us.”
Raito swallowed heavily and looked away, his arms pulling L’s body closer to him.
Soichiro patted his shoulder and moved away, letting his son have some space
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And for the life of me I couldn’t think what to write after that. I didn’t like it, so I didn’t add it on.
Now, some notes about the story:
I don’t know where I actually got this idea from. How I write is I’ll get a tiny idea, write it on a new word document, title it with something ridiculous and leave it alone. So a few months back, I was browsing through and came across THIS gem. This is exactly what I had written:
Right so okay L has just died and in a super ‘I’m so powerful and have defeated you Ryuzaki’ moment, Raito orders everyone out and fucks L’s mouth while he’s still warm. YOSH!
You can see how excited I was to be writing something like this, haha! So my computer is filled with these little notes about stories and occasionally one will want to be written a bit further and that’s what happened here! Hope you enjoyed it!
The task force found him like that, hunched over L’s body, surrounded by tissues which they assumed had been used to stem Raito’s tears. No one mentioned a thing, wanting to spare the boy the embarrassment and Matsuda quickly cleared them up.
Yagami-san laid a hand gently on his son’s shoulder, surprised when Raito started violently, letting out a choked noise. He stared down at Raito’s face, his son’s eyes red-rimmed and watery as he twisted his head to look up at his father.
“There was nothing you could have done, son. We all knew the risk, Ryuuzaki even more so then us.”
Raito swallowed heavily and looked away, his arms pulling L’s body closer to him.
Soichiro patted his shoulder and moved away, letting his son have some space
***********
And for the life of me I couldn’t think what to write after that. I didn’t like it, so I didn’t add it on.
Now, some notes about the story:
I don’t know where I actually got this idea from. How I write is I’ll get a tiny idea, write it on a new word document, title it with something ridiculous and leave it alone. So a few months back, I was browsing through and came across THIS gem. This is exactly what I had written:
Right so okay L has just died and in a super ‘I’m so powerful and have defeated you Ryuzaki’ moment, Raito orders everyone out and fucks L’s mouth while he’s still warm. YOSH!
You can see how excited I was to be writing something like this, haha! So my computer is filled with these little notes about stories and occasionally one will want to be written a bit further and that’s what happened here! Hope you enjoyed it!