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It Should Have Been Me

By: innocenceisavirtue
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Rating: Adult +
Chapters: 4
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Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto and I never will I also recieve no profit at all from this story. Naruto goes in credit to Masashi Kishimoto. Thank you for creating him and his story.
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A happy begining?

A/N: Wow! 245 hits! Thank you all so very much! I hope you enjoy this fic! For those of you who have seen Naruto's return to Konoha this is nothing like that. This is A/U. Sorry it has taken so long for this new chapter. I just lost my job so I've been very busy. Sorry the chapter is so short. Please Review!
-Parys

Chapter three: A happy begining?

He looked older, more mature, and had a stance that clearly said "don't fuck with me." but a smile that said "I want to be your friend.". Neji was feeling utterly confused. He had a feeling deep down that this day would not end happily. The Jounin wanted to rush over and greet his younger friend but at the same time wanted to punch him in his slightly smiling face. 'Hinata-Chan....' He thought. 'How will she react to his return?' With a sigh Neji turned and walked off towards his house.

The walk home was longer more meaningful today. There was a severe change now in Neji's little world. 'Did I really ever want him to return? Did I just want him to die so maybe I could be with Hinata?' He thought and stopped to stare at a nearby tree. "I can never have her..." He muttered aloud to the tree. After a few moments he hit the tree as hard as he could and then continued the walk home.

****

"Kiba-Kun, Shino-Kun?" Hinata asked her team mates completely confused, her cheeks growing red with the oncoming realization. Kiba and Shino looked at each other for a moment locked in a glare. "I'm sorry." Hinata blurted out taking their attention back to the purple haired girl. They removed their arms from around her shoulders and came to stand in front of her.

"What are you sorry about Hinata-Chan?" Shino asked calmly trying to keep all his attention on her.

"I don't know if I can return the affections of either of you. I am still waiting for Naruto-Kun to return. If he dosen't share my affection... I don't know what I'll do. Thank you for sharing with me. I'm sorry Shino-Kun, Kiba-Kun." Hinata said this statement slowly so as not to trip over her words. She had more than her own love to worry about now. She had to worry about breaking her two best friends' hearts. She could never forgive herself if she did that, but just as she only has eyes for Naruto, Naruto only has eyes for Sakura.

"I...We will respect your feelings Hinata and give you the time you need." Shino said seeing the look of confusion on his friends face. She smiled brightly and hopped up quickly wiping her tears away. She went into Byakugan and got in fighting stance.

“Practice time!”

****

Naruto was so happy to be home. It felt like he had left for an eternity and the it had taken one to also get back. With ero-sennin by his side he tried to stay rigged and focused instead of giddy like a school girl. Then the scent caught his nose. The scent of vanilla and jasmine. “Sakura-Chan…” he mumbled looking around quickly. Then he saw her. The pink haired girl hadn’t changed much. Her clothes were different, but so were his, and her stance had changed to accommodate for her newly developed strength. She was beautiful. He tried not to draw any attention to himself but found that it was to late a small boy rushed up to him and took him by surprise.

“Boss!” the boy yelled at the top of his lungs.

“Konohamaru! You’ve grown up!” Naruto said looking down at the preteen. Sakura spun around quickly at the sound of that voice. Her cheeks reddened and her became full of tears and she smiled.

“Naruto!” She called out. Quickly the blonde stopped fussing and playing around with Konohamaru then turned to face Sakura. In a whirl of pink she was hugging him as a small crowd gathered to welcome Naruto back to the village.

****

Jiraya snuck away from the crowd so Naruto could have his moment. He walked to the Hokage building to report back to Tsunade that he and Naruto had returned, and the things he had found out about Naruto’s fox state. He waggled his eyebrows at the guards before walking into her office.

“Tsunade-Chan! I have returned so we can go out on a date now!” Jiraya announced to the empty office. One of the guards came in and said quickly “She’s at the hot springs today Jiraya-San!”.

“Damn… Oh well tell her I came by. I’m off to go see pretty women!” With that Ero-sennin bounced away to find a happy rendezvous for the evening.

****

Panting Hinata leaned against a tree while wiping sweat from her forehead. She lost the practice fight so she now had to buy Ramen for everyone as per their new daily practice ritual. Shino, Kiba and Akamaru waited patiently for Hinata to cool off. She began doing her after practice stretches and the two boys found themselves unable to look away. They both began turning red and started panting a little when Hinata noticed their gazes and stopped.

“Am I doing something wrong? Do I have something in my hair? Did I rip part of my clothes?” She began asking becoming slightly panicked. The boys blushed and rushed over to her and started walking out of the clearing Akamaru obediently following.

“No we’re both just really hungry.” Kiba stated both of them stil holding her arms practically carrying her out of there. Hinata blushed at the close proximity and grounded her feet letting them know she can walk to ichiraku on her own.

As they came out of the woods into town they all heard a a slight commotion. They started asking people closest to the what was going on and not many seemed to know. They soon made it toward the gathering point and Hinata saw something she was not expecting. In the center of the gathering she saw spiky yellow hair.

“Naruto-Kun…” Hinata fainted into the arms of her two friends who proceeded to carry her to the Ramen shop.

“Damn…” they thought while carrying her away. “he’s back…”

To be continued...

-Parys

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