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The Revenge of Raharu, The Earth in Deep Poo v2

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Somewhat Grand Finale

Disclaimer: See Chapter One.

Chapter Four: A Somewhat Grand Finale

The devious brother of Atomsk snickered as he noticed a certain someone in a red Vespa gaining. “That's one dumb kid.”

“You mean Ta-kun is following us?” Haruko asked, amused.

“Yeah, it's getting quite redundant.”

“We better finish him, otherwise Odin might do something horrific.”

“Hell yeah we should.” The deranged Valkyrie turned into a parking lot of a 7-11 on the outskirts of the city.

Naota pulled in right behind him.

After they dismounted their scooters, they engaged in an intense starting contest.

The young man was mostly ignoring Artemis however, giving most of his attention to the pink haired wonder. “Why did you do it?” His voice was a barely audible whisper.

“Do what?” Raharu mocked innocence.

“You used me! You used me to further your own selfish agenda! Do you have any idea how much that hurt? I loved you so much!” He paused for a moment, his voice lowering.

“...I thought you liked me too.”

Haruko laughed. “Like a scrawny little weakling like you could ever satisfy me. You're just a kid! Always will be!”

'Amarao was right,' Naota reasoned with himself, 'she has no soul.' He strengthen his resolve. “It's too bad you had to oppose me like this, Haruko, for all it will bring you is death.”

She was hardly feeling threatened. “Come on, Ta-kun, is that the best line you can come up with?”

It seldom mattered on how cheesy his line was as a red aura began to engulf him yet again with much more force than the occurrence minutes prior. “Raharu, your death is at hand. Because of the hatred I bore unto you, I have at last managed to manifest the true power of the N-O.”

Haruko's face went from overly enthusiastic to completely pissed off. “Ta-kun, how dare you? That power is mine and mine alone!!”

Artemis cut in, ready to strike the young man down with his Specter bass. “Let's just kill this punk already!” He swung as hard as he could...

However, the young Nandaba caught the butt of the guitar with his left had with no effort. “You shall be the first to die for intervening!” Naota punched Artemis in the face with his right fist. The result? The evil twin of Atomsk was finally laid to rest as his head exploded into kibbles and bits.

Haruko began backpedaling, fearing her horrid demise at the hands of this ethereal being, this adolescent boy who had a grudge against her.

“Naota-kun, you can't kill me!” Haruko begged.

“I'm sorry, Haruko-san. I just have to.”

“Naota-kun, please forgive me.” She dropped to her knees, looking into his eyes.

“Never going to happen, you die here and now!” He grabbed the Specter bass from the recently maid corpse and headed in the pink haired wonders direction.

“Naota-kun!” Tears started to stream from her eyes.

The young man raised the guitar to deal a final blow. “Haruko, I pray for your soul.”

A metallic black BMW rushed towards them. It came to a screeching halt no more than a couple meters away when Eri jumped out of the front passenger door. “Don't do it, Naota!”

“Why shouldn't I?”

“Because you'll never forgive yourself!” She looked down solemnly. “...Because part of you still loves her.”

“Eri, you're the only one I want. I have to kill her and all these other psychos so no harm can ever come to you!”

The young Ninamori quickly closed the distance and wrapped her arms around his warm ethereal form. “Please Naota, it would help me feel at ease.”

Naota studied his lover and sighed. He briefly looked to Rahuru, powering down his ki to normal levels. He spat, “you're lucky that my better half is so forgiving.”

Eri blushed that he referred to her as his better half.

“...But if you ever do anything to harm her, I'll fucking kill you.” The boy's voice was monotone, absolute zero cold.

Haruko could only get to her feet and walk away. “Goodbye, Naota.” They weren't able to hear her.

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Two months passed. The sixteen year olds, both high school drop outs and married, spent their days in utter bliss, making love, playing video games, or watching metal videos. On occasion they would sit at the same bridge Mamimi use to or walk around the Medical Meccanica plant rubble. Naota even quit smoking and drinking.

Tasuku and Mamimi were also wed, their ceremony taking place a week after the younglings. They partook in the same normal activities as the other couple (though they still were hardcore drug users), often hanging out with them.

While life was ordinary, they preferred it that way.

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...However, all good things must come to an end...

End Revenge of Raharu, the Earth in Deep Poo.

Next saga: Martial Arts Tournament Massacre, Odin's Reign of Terror
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