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The Return of Atomsk v2

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Chapter Six

Disclaimer: See first chapter.


Chapter Six


Previously on THE RETURN OF ATOMSK, Naota had used his entire mite, as well as a Gibson EB Zero replica, to deliver a massive blow to the butt of Artemis’s head. The result: NO EFFECT! Artemis, whom acquired God-like status, intended to destroy the young boy, as well as his loved ones...

...and eat them for lunch.


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Artemis snickered at the boy’s futile attempt at injuring him. “It’s hard to imagine I was once weak enough to be killed by such an attack, but no longer. With the Ragnarok and Excalibur in my possession, I will be able to rule this ent…” POW! “That fuggin’ hurt! Who the hell did that?”


Artemis looked down at the ground. “A baseball? SOMEBODY THREW A BASEBALL AT ME? THE NERVE!!” SMACK! Another baseball hit Artemis square in the nose, making him bleed. 'A sniper perhaps? One of Atomsk’s goons? The IIB? It doesn’t matter….the force is strong with this one.'


“Hey, it’s not nice to pick on little kids.” It was the voice of a mysterious man.


Naota was in disbelief. 'Could it be? No way...'


Artemis scowled, infuriated by this skilled sniper. “WHO THE HELL ARE YOU?”


This guy was a cocky man. “The role model of pint-sized athletes everywhere!”


The mutinous Valkyrie was growing impatient. “Reveal yourself, coward!”


“Sure, why not?”


A shadow loomed over Artemis and he noticed this too late. When he looked up, he saw a good-sized man on the verge of vertically jump kicking him with both feet. 'Oh shit…'


PLUNK! This young man drove Artemis face first into the ground after a hard kick.


Noata could not be happier for this helping hand. “TASUKU!!”


Tasuku was much larger than the average oriental man. He stood six feet with 22” biceps. Attire was his New York Yankees uniform. He also sported a 38” long, aluminum Louisville Slugger in his right hand. Turning to Naota, he gave him the thumbs up. “Hey runt! Long time no see!”


Artemis slowly got up, purple blood oozing from his nose and mouth. “How the hell could a regular human do this? IT’S NOT POSSIBLE!!!”


Tasuku smirked. “During the off season, I took martial arts lessons from Hado sensei Ken Masters and magic lessons from Black Mage. Also been filling up on a lot of Cell Tech and Nitro Tech.” He turned to face Naota and smiled. “As soon as Kamon told me that you were in trouble, I got here as fast as I could.”


The evil brother of Atomsk scoffed at this development. 'I had no idea Street Fighter and Final Fantasy were based on a true stories. This is bad!'


Tasuku turned back to Artemis. “Come on, big man! Let’s get this party started.”


Artemis was enraged by this guy’s confidence. “YOU SON OF A BITCH!!” He charged at the opposition, and brought both the Ragnarok and Excalibur down as hard as he could…


Amarao was amazed by the jock's agility, “NO WAY, HE VANISHED!!”


Artemis growled in frustration. “Every time I gain a new level of power, someone else has to come along and surpass me! What the fuck is up with this BULLSHIT?”


Tasuku hovered fifteen or so meters in the air. “Looking for me?”


The mutinous ex-Valkyrie Admiral was not happy about any of this. “GRRRRRRRRRRR!!!”


The Baseball ace didn’t have time to waste, deciding it was time to end the little skirmish sooner than later. He yelled to Naota, Eri, and the IIB agents, “best take cover, ‘cuz the roof on this joint is about to be set on FIIIIIIIIIIIIIRE!”


Naota, Eri, Amarao, and Kitsurubami ran down to the sewer, not questioning him at all.


Meanwhile, a green energy field surrounded Tasuku as he charged up for a massive attack.


Artemis did not like what he sensed. 'Oh fuck, he’s going to cast the spell of all spells!'


Tasuka shouted an incantation, “forces of mother nature, embedded with the power of Demon Lord Chaos himself: NUKE!!”


All Artemis could do was yell out, “FUCK THIIIIIIIII…”


KABOOM!! A somewhat compact mushroom cloud of fire engulfed an entire mile radius, totally vaporizing Artemis.


((((section divider))))


Minutes later…


Tasuku looked around him after the smoke cleared. “Oops.” In addition to Artemis being vanquished, a few city blocks were left in ruins by his spell. He sighed out of embarrassment. “Heh, guess I don’t know my own strength.”


((((section divider))))


At the Rehu palace, Raharu was ready to put her scheming into action. “Looks like it's time for me to round up the cattle!”


Atomsk smirked. “How will you do that? They're far too powerful for you…”


Raharu pondered her situation. The pirate king did not see her nails extending into four-inch claws. “Sorry, love. This is just something I just have to do.” Without further ado, the pink haired wonder plunged her razer sharp claw into Atomsk’s heart, leaving him speechless. “By the way, I never loved you. The only one I love…IS ME!! WITH YOUR FULL POWER AT MY DISPOSAL, MY POWER SHALL BE GREAT ENOUGH TO TAKE CARE OF THEM!” As soon as she was done gloating, she said one last thing, “by the way, I've been working undercover for the master of darkness, Overlord Odin, all this time!”


His face shifted in horrified disbelief right before he croaked.

She laughed as the bloodied, mingled corpse of Atomsk fell to the floor. At the same time, black bat wings sprouted from her upper back. “Watch out Nandaba brothers, I am coming for you both! HA, HA, HA, HA, HA!!”


With Atomsk and Artemis dead, there were less people who posed any threat to the almighty Odin. Now, Raharu is ready to head for earth and do combat against the Naota and Tasuku in order to fulfill the dark lord's plan. Will she succeed? Will she eventually turn on her master? So many questions will be left unanswered as the next chapter will be the finale and leave off in a cliffhanger!


End Chapter Six.
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