Darkness Within your Light

Warnings: Shinigami Raito, worried L, language, humor, fluff, ummm…what else? Shocked Watari?

This is more of a filler type chapter (but does contain important plot twists!) the next chapter should be longer.

Thank you to all who have reviewed my story, I have decided to respond to my wonderous reviews soo...thank you again^-^

Elle,- Wow my story is the best you ever read?!(REALLY REALLLY HAPPY!) ^_^I loved writing chapter 7 mostly because there was so much feelings in it, I'm glad you like it too. I also loved how human my Lawliet was...hehe just wait till you read this chapter. more then once I was like 'AWWW' hehe, I'm really happy that you are enjoying my story and I always look forward to your reviews^-^ you can never express yourself wierdly, you can only express yourself,(and I like your reviews and enthusiasm :)sorry I'm kind of in a really good mood-^-^ thank you for the reviews and hope to see many more in the future...:D

Aurora Moon,- Thank you for pointing out my grammer mistake, I remember looking at what I was writting and wondering why that word just looked wrong to me >_< now I know. Actually I remember thinking of a similar idea to what you had thought up...I just kind of forgot about it>-< Dumb author. But I like your idea a bit better then what I was going to do so...can I kind of use yours? it won't be exactally the same or anything but the general idea...anyway please tell me if I can use it(if not well...my idea was kind of similar to yours...but not as good)I'm kind of post-poning Raito explaining to L about knowing the name till then. XP

Mustang89,- I'm so glad you love it! ^-^ the fighting was fun...but you really do have to feel sorry for both L and Raito. L for having a tramadic past experience as a child, and Raito getting knocked out when L woke up to him kissing him >-< hehehe thanks for the review and hope you love this chapter just as much as the last one. ^_^

Linkala,- Awww please don't cry! T-T. truth be told I may have shad a tear or two in my own L plushy...heheh I don't think anyone expected that to happen to L...least of all him. heheh it just came to me and I was like oh L is always getting hurt by some junkie or criminal...why not have him mistaken for a junkie instead? I didn't really think of him being a child until I decided to make it more tramadic...it was really unpredictable huh? That's kind of what I like about my own writting..even I don't really know what's going to happen till my hands just write it for me (idle hands!)I decided to put this chapter up as soon as possible when I got your review...how are your nails by the way? I hope this chapter will help with the withdrawal symptoms. heheh I'm so glad you like my story that much...(it makes an authors life feel complete^_^)

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It had gotten dark once again. Raito felt like his was floating...everything seemed kind of muffled…sound…touch…everything.

After an unknown amount of time in which Raito just kind of drifted in a pleasant haze he soon became aware of a nagging noise. At first it was still kind of stifled but as time went by it became more and more clear.

“ito-kun! Raito-kun! Wake up please! Raito-kun-”

It was frankly starting to bother him, but what seemed to bother him even more then being pulled away from the pleasant drifting that he had been engaged in was that he couldn’t understand what the person was talking about. Sure he heard everything but who was this Raito-kun…Oh.

It all came back to him suddenly.

‘Shit that’s me! I must have passed out again…why the hell does that seem to be the only thing that I’ve been doing lately? And…ah that’s sees to be Ryuzaki who’s calling out to me…he seems kind of frantic though…I wonder why? The last thing I remember was being stuck in that room and punching L out…OH SHIT!!! I didn’t…fuck I did! I fucking kissed him!! Shit-mother fucker-god damnit-for all that is holy-argh! Is this what Ryuk meant when he said that the Deathnote only brought misfortune? Because seriously my life can not get more messed up right now then it already is…wait…I shouldn’t say that just incase…you never know what the hells going to happen next in this freaking messed up life of mine…darn L’s still screaming out…he really must be worried. I guess I better get up and console him before Watari comes in and thinks I’m killing him or something…’

At that moment Raito would have blushed if he had been able too. If Watari was listening on the other side of the door all he would be hearing was L calling out Raito’s name…oh shit, forget that he wasn’t just blushing, he now felt like he would spontaneously combust with mortification.

‘Damn…did I always have such a dirty mind or is this only a recent development? Well whatever I need to wake up and shut L up before Watari comes in here with a shot gun aimed for my head.’

With that mental sigh Raito started to try to wake up…it proved to be a lot harder then he had thought it would be.

After struggling for what felt for hours Raito finally felt his body move some…the thing was that L hadn’t stopped calling out…it was like he hadn’t noticed at all.

‘God L get over your hysterical fit and see that I’m awake! Or at least aware enough where I can hear you’re freaking out! Hehe at least I have something to nag him with. I think…yea I can move now it seems…let’s see if I can speak…I’ll keep my eyes closed for now…they seem to be really stinging for some reason…’

“H-hey L…you can stop acting like a hysterical Misa now…I’m awake.”

Raito waited for L to get all prissy over the idea that he was acting like Misa but…it never came. L was still acting like he hadn’t heard a word that Raito just said, even though Raito could hear himself loud and clear.

‘Weird, L might be a lot of things but he isn’t unobservant…what’s going on?’

Raito decided to try to open his eyes and see what was happening. He was still oblivious that the floating feeling that he had felt earlier when he had been asleep was still there.

Raito slowly pried open his eye lids, which felt like a giant weight was holding them down. But Raito was determined and if you asked anyone who knew Raito they would tell you when Raito wanted something badly enough he got it in the end.

What he saw when he finally opened his eyes just left him in totally and complete shock. His jaw dropped and his eyes widen till they seemed to almost take over his face. The heaviness had vanished the instant he saw the scene before him.

He himself seemed to be floating a few feet in the air…and directly below him was a frantic L shaking and holding onto his passed out body.

‘Well…that’s not good.’

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It took a few minutes to get over the shock of seeing that he no longer occupied his body. He quickly looked at himself and…yep he was in his shinigami form. His eyesight also seemed to be in a permanent haze of red.

‘Yea…I remember now…didn’t the King say something about this? That I could leave my body once it became unconscious or something like that? Hmmm…I wonder…hey what’s L doing now?’

L had finally stopped shaking and screaming out Raito’s name in the hope to wake him up. He was instead pulling something out of his pocket…ah his cell phone.

L frantically started to punch in what seemed to be a long sequence of random numbers. After about a minute or two of him doing that he finally pushed the send button and started to visibly calm down.

Raito was once again fascinated by L’s display of human emotions, and because L didn’t realize that anyone could even see him at the moment he showed even more then ever.

L gave a sigh of exhaustion and then proceeded to help Raito’s body into a more comfortable position. He looked like he was just going to lay him on the floor, but paused before another thoughtful expression over took his pervious panicked expression.

He then did something that shocked and pleased Raito like nothing else. He had moved Raito’s body in the same position that Raito had put L in when he had been knocked out. Only this time it was Raito’s head in L’s lap.

‘Oh darn it…I wish I was awake for that…aww look he’s running his hand through my hair too. I wish I could feel that…Wow with all the fluffy feelings that I’m feeling right now I wouldn’t be surprised if my mind turned to mush…good-bye intelligence, hello stupidly…and don’t I feel really dumb right now, I wond-hey what the hell is that?!’

Raito finally got around to noticing the strange markings above L’s head…no L Lawliet’s head.

‘Oh shit…that’s his life span isn’t it? Why can’t I read it?! Aren’t I supposed to be able to understand shinigami language now that I’m part shinigami!?’

But before Raito could get anymore worked up about it the strange numbers started to shift and change into a sequence that he could understand now.

‘Ok…that was strange, good though. Now let’s see when L’s death day is…WHAT!!! Only about 2 years from now!?!’

Raito was understandably shocked and appalled.

‘What the hell L! That’s barely a year after I killed you…shit did you chock on a candy or something?! Geez…what the hell am I going to do with you...wait the lifenote…’

Raito started to quickly scan his strange new form; his wings especially would take some time to get use to. After remembering that his note was on the chain by his belt he quickly pulled it out.

It just looked so harmless…just like it’s brother the deathnote…but this note saved lives…it didn’t ruthlessly steal them like the deathnote did.

Raito was wondering just how many more years he should add to L when he finally noticed that something very important was missing.

‘Shit! I don’t have a pen!’

Raito was just thinking of using one of his sharp claws to pierce his skin and write in his blood. He was also wondering if this notebook had any of its rules written down inside of it like the deathnote had.

He opened the life note was surprised to see a long slime white pen laying in between the pages that he had just randomly opened. It had strange symbols carved into it, kind of like the symbols that had marked the cave that the little Mother had resided in. It was strange though…it didn’t seem like a normal pen…as if anything could possibly be normal in his life anymore. But still there was only a sharp fine point at the end; it was more a sharp piece of metal then any type of pen…oh.

‘Well darn…I guess I will have to use my blood as ink…I guess that makes sense…I am giving the people who I write down the names in this note some of my life-force. And blood is a major part of any type of life-force. Life blood equals longer life…heh I guess you could say that my blood is the Water of Life now. Ok then…you’d better appreciate this L…I won’t put down too many years…after all if I get my way and I know I will you will be immortal like me soon enough.’

Raito lifted the sharp stick out of the lifenote and without further thought drove the sharp point of it into his wrist. He thought maybe if he could get to a vein that it would work better.

He watched in fascination as his blood welled up from the slightly jagged hole that he had just made. Surprisingly even though he was sure that he had just hit a vein not much blood spilled out. Only a few drops at most. He was glad though to see that the pen’s point seemed to be covered enough in his blood to write with.

He watched as the small hole close up and heal like nothing had happened. Deciding to speculate about it later he turned to look at L.

…who had seemed to have fallen asleep again without Raito noticing, L’s head was leaning downward towards the empty shell of his body, his arms where also wrapped around Raito’s body as if they were protecting it from some outside force, soft snores had once again started to fill the room again.

Raito then took the pen and opened the note back up and placed the point of the pen to the first page of the lined paper…he then proceeded to write L’s name down and the extra life span that Raito would be giving him. After he was done he looked at the red lettering that marred the white piece of paper. He was amazed that something so simple could hold such significance for both him and the one he had written down. His orderly neat handwriting glared back at him.

L Lawliet- 25 years

It was as simply as that.

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After that was done and said with, Raito just decided to float around and think. He resolute not to go back into his body just yet, there was so much that he could do and see in his shinigami form and he didn’t really know how to come back into this form without having to have himself being knocked out.

Raito remembered that Ryuk had been able to control his body enough to walk around like a normal human so that’s the first thing Raito tried to do. Floating was fun and all that but he would feel much more normal if his feet were firmly on the ground.

After a few failed attempts in which he hung upside-down more often then not, which he thanked god that no one could see him right now, he finally was able to get his feet on the ground. He had absentmindly noticed that his shoes were no longer black with dirt from the shinigami realm, he was happy about that because if he had to have one character flaw it was that he was obsessed with cleanness…well if you don’t call killing thousands of people and trying to take over the world a character flaw that is.

Raito had remembered to put away his lifenote but he had no idea what to do with the pen, it was only on a whim that he had placed it back in between the pages of the note and closed it that he noticed the notebook became flat like there was nothing in it.

‘That’s useful.’

After that Raito tried to see if he could become incorporeal enough so he could move through the wall. That actually proved much easier to do then his earlier attempts at grounding himself had. He just had to will his body to become intangible and then will it back when he wanted to touch something solidly.

He decided the moment that L and his body were safely out of this room that he would go exploring…I mean he was invisible to everyone and everything around him…why not have some fun?

‘And also I need time to think of a plan of action…hmmm I bet the moment I wake up L will start asking about his name again and how I know it…maybe I can tell him a half-truth? Yes, that way L can’t accuse me of lying to him. I just won’t tell him all the facts. Also maybe he won’t ask about…well, The Kiss. Shit, I’m thinking in underlined capitals now. Anyway he just might be too embarrassed by it and how he acted. I know for a fact that he is not disgusted by me touching him which is always a big plus. I could have sworn that I saw regret on his face when he punched me…ok it was more of a really hard slap, but in my defense my head hit the wall harder, enough so that I believe I might just have a slight concussion. Hmm to bad I can’t play the guilt card, L just immune I guess.’

Raito entertained himself for the next hour by either practicing his flying, which was really hard to do in such a small room but he did master how to hover at least. He was just getting use to his more…interesting appearance now that he had time to really look over himself. He chuckled to himself when he remembered that he had once told Ryuk when he was younger how he would have done a deal to get a shinigami’s wings instead of doing the deal for the eyes. Well now he had the wings and he didn’t even have to give half of his life for it…he had only to die first.

He was even starting to kind of like his appearance, well kind of anyway. He could have done without the straightjacket and long nails that resembled claws more then anything else, also long hair was really hard to tame, and his hair just kept getting tangled into his wings. He would have to either cut it off, or find a hair tie. As soon as he had thought that he felt something on his wrist. Looking down he saw a small white hair tie wrapped around it.

“Wow isn’t that convenient.”

After pulling his hair into a more manageable tail that flowed down his back and trailed right between his wings, leaving his poor wings in peace, he decided to take a look at the lifenote.

He opened the notebook again to start looking for any rules or guidelines and such stuff like that. He did find a few on the backside of the cover page. At first they were in that same kind of language that Raito had started to exasperatingly call the Shinigami Chicken Scratches, but they quickly started to morph into a more human language. Interesting enough they didn’t become Japanese but English wording instead. He just gave a mental shrug and decided that must have been something that the Shinigami King and Ryuk had in common. They were just to lazy to think of a more individual language to fit the person the note went to, and just went with the most common language known to man.

After reading the first few rules which were the ones that the Shinigami King had already warned him about, like how he need the face and name of the person he wanted to write in the lifenote, how he need to write down the number of years that need to be added. How that the person who’s name is written in the note can not be killed by a deathnote, and how he as the owner of the Lifenote was to under no circumstances ever write in a Deathnote with the intention of killing a human being. There were only two other rules in the LifeNote that the King had not talked about. Raito decided he would read them now.

His eyes widen a little in surprise when he read them. One was that he was only aloud to tell his intended about how he was an immortal shinigami; it was ok if a person figured out by themselves but he couldn’t purposely leave any type of clue or hints about his true nature.

‘Interesting…but I doubt anyone will come to the conclusion that I’m not human anymore…even more so that I’m an Immortal God of Death, or at least half anyway…hmm well maybe Near would be able to figure out something to that nature if he felt like it.’

Before he could read the other rule in the notebook a noise had him looking up. L had finally fallen forward in his sleep…the thing was when he did that he fell right on top of Raito’s body. L had somehow managed to stay asleep as the top of his body curled right on top of Raito’s chest. Raito saw that the top of L’s head was just slightly touching his body’s chin.

‘Aww damn it! I really wish I could go back into my body right now! But still…who knows when the next time I’ll be able to be in my shinigami form? Still…I really wish L had at least one camera in here…this is just too priceless a scene. I wonder what he’s going to do Watari wakes him up. Hehe yea, just try to talk yourself out of that one L.’

Raito gave a slightly malicious laugh at the image that popped into his head at that thought, he then became intangible again and stuck his head out the door to see if Watari was there yet, just as he did that he saw that the elevator that had taken him and L to this floor opened up.

‘Ah and here he comes now…maybe I should leave now…naw I just have to see what happens.’

He watched still with his head sticking out the door while the rest of him was back in the room as Watari came closer. He watched in fascination as Watari hunched over until he was right at the height of where L was usually at. Then he stared at a spot at the door. It was only then that Raito remembered about L saying that there was a rectal scanner you needed to pass to enter the room. After a moment he watched as Watari straighten back up and produced a key from one of his pockets.

Raito quickly stuck his head back into the room just as the door opened. He watched as Watari quickly walked in the room and wasn’t really surprised as he saw him pull out a revolver out of his jacket just before he stepped into the room.

Raito started to smirk as he saw Watari freeze when he caught sight of his employer and his employer’s suspect all cuddly and close.

Raito’s snickering turned into full blown laughter as he saw Watari’s mouth drop comically and a kind of stutter come out of his mouth. The revolver which had been poised to shot had almost fallen out of his hand in shock.
Sadly Watari got himself composed at lot sooner then Raito had hoped, what was even sadder was that L had still been asleep through all of it. Watari quickly put on his own mask of the polite kind keep-your-mouth-shut employee, but Raito knew that later L would get a stern talking too by Watari. Raito only hoped that he would still be in this form to witness it.

Watari had put away the dangling gun now that he saw that it was not needed. He must have noted though that both of them needed medical attention though because he quickly pulled out a roll of bandages out of one of his other pockets.

Watari walked quickly over to the still sleeping forms of both L and Raito and silently shook L awake.

Who then swiftly woke up, at first he just stared uncomprehending at Watari, as if he couldn’t quite figure out what he was doing there.

Not two seconds later Raito could see as all the memories come back to him, he also just started to notice the position that he was in. Namely he was curled around the half naked form of Raito’s body and was holding onto him like someone would suddenly take Raito away from him.

L didn’t show any outer appearance of embarrassment in front of Watari but Raito knew that he must be totally humiliated inside.

Watari quickly helped L move Raito’s body around so that L could stand up. Without a word between them Watari quickly handed L the bandages and then proceeded to pick up Raito’s limp body. Raito just floated along beside them as they finally left that…damned room behind.

It was only as they had gotten in the elevator did Watari speak to L.

“Do you need to go to the infirmity? I could get a doctor to check on young Yagami-san.”

L tried to look like he was thinking but it was obvious to anyone who was looking at him that he was exhausted. Raito guessed going hours without any water or food and never really getting enough sleep could even tire out the famous L, not to mention that they had spent hours fighting, and he just might still feel emotional drained from confessing a childhood trauma to his number one suspect. Yep, L had a right to be exhausted.

“No Watari I don’t think that it will be necessary, I believe that Raito-kun is only suffering from a small concussion and our wounds aren’t too serious. We just need to quickly get bandaged up, and I really do need to get some kind of sleep I guess. I’m not up to thinking to my fullest capacity right now and that would not be good for the case. So we will be adjuring to our room now. I will put on the handcuffs tomorrow and deal with everything then. If it’s not too much trouble would it be alright if you check on Raito-kun every few hours tonight? I don’t want him to slip in a deeper coma or anything like that. I’d do it myself of course but…”

Watari’s expression had started to morph into a more empathic and understanding look. He really did care for his young employer and always did try to show L that he was only human and need to rest and relax once in a while just like the rest of them.

“I understand L, I will do as you say…though you needn’t have asked, I would have done so anyway. Will you need any assistance with young Yagami-san?”

L’s face had showed its silent thanks and gratitude at Watari’s thoughtfulness. He quickly shook his head though at Watari’s question.

“No that will not be necessary, I’m just going to put a few bandages around the worse of the wounds and then dump him on the bed. Anything else could wait till tomorrow.”

Watari nodded his head to show that he understood. When the elevator had finally stopped on the floor that Raito assumed would be the one that he and L were going to share. Watari handed Raito’s limp body to L who then proceeds to shoulder him in a fireman carry.

Watari didn’t leave the elevator with L and just called out a goodnight as L moved out of the elevator and started to walk down the long hallway.

Raito who had been silent to himself as he watched all of this unfold in front of him looked around.

‘Ah yes now I remember…yep this is the same floor as last time when L and I were handcuffed together…hmm I wonder if we will have separate beds this time? Last time a complained so much that L had finally relented and bought two double size beds to replace the king sized one that had been in their shared room previously…but this time I have no need to complain…actually the one bed will work to my advantage…hmmm well I just hope that L doesn’t decide to change it any time soon.’

Raito who had been floating behind the walking form of L was so deep in thought that he almost floated by the still form of L who was unlocking a door.

Quickly doing an about-face while lightly blushing he started to walk into the room too when L closed the door in his face.

Luckily for Raito he could become incorporeal, so he didn’t feel it as the door passed through half of his face. Still…he was kind of pissed at L for doing such a thing, even though he knew L couldn’t see him at the moment he couldn’t help but send L a dirty look.

Walking fully into the apartment that made up this entire floor Raito looked around and ignored L who had sat Raito’s body down onto the bed in the bedroom and started to quickly treat some of Raito’s more pressing wounds. Raito walked around and started to remember.

“Ah that’s the sofa that L had stained after he tried to balance chocolate cake and jelly frosting…god was Watari pissed at that, heheh. And…ah yes the kitchen, if I remember rightly this was L’s most favorite place…and if I’m not mistaken I bet the fridge is already stocked with a bunch of sugary treats. L if you didn’t die of diabetes you’d die of a clogged artery. I need to start incorporating some fruits and vitamins rich foods into your diet again…sigh, that took forever last time…but at least now I know that you will at least try it if I put some type of sugar in it…which really defeats the whole purpose now that I think about it. Oh well, you’ll be immortal soon enough I guess so all we have to worry about then is if you’d get fat…but I doubt you will, not with the fights we get into.”

After walking around a bit more and reminiscing about the past that was now his current present he quickly moved back into the bedroom.

It seemed that while he had been wandering around L had finished with bandaging both himself and Raito’s body. At the moment L was maneuvering Raito around so that he could be in a semi-comfortable sleeping arrangement. That might not seem like much but for Raito who had just heard L tell Watari that he was just going to dump him on the bed and then forget about him for the rest of the night, well…he couldn’t but feel a bit touched.

After L had pulled the covers up onto Raito’s unconscious form, Raito noted that L had left his pants on, he then proceeded himself to turn off the overhead light and curl up on his side of the huge bed.

Raito watched for a bit as the gentle snores soon filled the room. As he was just about to leave to explore the outside world, he even had turned all the way around to face the window; he heard a soft shifting which pointed that one of the occupants on the bed where moving, and since he wasn’t even inside his body for it to move it had to be L.

Raito had taken just a quick look back to see what L was doing. He had already been in the act of spreading his wings out to start to fly when he turned around.

The scene that greeted his eyes when he turned his head around was enough to make him stumble and almost caused him to do a summersault in mid-air.

L had somehow moved over from his side of the bed and was now engaged in cuddling Raito’s still form.

‘Oh my god…that is just waaayyy to cute...wow if I didn’t have such a great photogenic memory I would be frantically hunting down for a camera right now! Geez is he touched staved or what…well I guess I’ll let him…cuddle me for tonight…argh I’ve really have become soft haven’t I? First I let the Little Mother hug me and now it’s L. oh well, I guess it could be worse…at least he’s not molesting me in my sleep or anything like that…I’m pretty sure he wouldn’t do that…maybe I should stay here just in case.’

After arguing with himself for a few minutes Raito decided to give L the benefit of the doubt. He quickly took one last look at the two still forms on the bed before he jumped out of the window that faced the side of the wall.

He had forgotten it was a 50 floor foot drop.

After falling for about 20 or so floors he finally remembered he had wings and started to flap them frantically, when he started to gain altitude he told himself that he had not screamed out like a little girl and to just put that whole humiliation scene behind him and never think about it again.

After looking at the sky he determined that it was around sometime in the early evening of the next day.

‘Hmm so I was in that room for over half a day, sooo…what should I do now before I go back? I have only a few hours before L will wake back up and try to wake me up as well.’

Raito then made a decision.

‘Its been a while since I saw my family…yes, I think I’ll go see how mom and Sayu are doing…and hopefully dad is relaxing too, though knowing him maybe not…hopefully mom and Sayu were able to convince him though…also…I need to see their life-spans…no matter what I will add to whatever number they are just so that they would be under my LifeNote’s protection. So…I guess it’s homeward bound.’

With that thought Raito started to soar through the darkening sky towards his home…the home he hadn’t really thought of as home since he had first touched the DeathNote…and to the family that he had discarded the first time.

But not this time…this time he would not take for granted the warm loving family that had given him so much and who he had hardly given anything back too.

As Raito was flying through the air he had no indication of what awaited him at his house.

He had no notion of what was about to transpire. That would once yet again change his life.

For the better or more then likely for the worse.

If he had he just might of have stayed in the building with the sleeping L.

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I know that this is much shorter then my last chapter but…I have so much planned out for the next two or three chapters that I wanted to space it all in a lot more chapters. Just so that it wouldn’t seem like to much is happening in one chapter. So instead of having all my plots/ideas in two or three chapters I’m going to space it like four or five instead. That might seem like my chapters will be really short but they won’t be so don’t worry. I promised myself that my chapters will never be lower then 10 or so pages…let’s see if I can stick with that promise shall we?

The next chapter will have a surprised guest. Can you guess who it will be? Hmm give it your best guess; it doesn’t matter if you’re wrong or right but it could be fun to see what you all say. :) it will be a twist on the story yet again…oh yea this story might seem like it’s going a little slow plot wise but that’s just because this will be a very long story…so I’m pacing myself :-)

Also you might want to hurry on guessing who will be the surprising guest, I’m already writing the next chapter, hehehehe I can hear the readers squeals of joy XP

I made this chapter have a kind of a cliff-hanger because I’m mean like that ;p naw I did it because it seemed like a good place to stop it at. Still…you could review and tell me about what you think (HINT)

Also I have a very important question to pose to all my readers…what do you think of the idea of an mpreg? Not in this story but maybe in a sequel? If I get enough positive feedback on it, I will have a kind of epilogue at the end of this story beginning the introduction of a sequel…truth be told I already have a really good idea for that story and would love to write it…but let’s just see what you all have to say nee? Remember that they will be immortals…so it will be very different then the traditional mpreg. Also it will be my type of mpreg…which means not much detail on the pregnancy itself, but the story behind it and all that…it would actually be really action pack and angsty and plot driven… but filled with yaoi goodness with our two favorite boys. Maybe I’m posting this to earlier in the story…I’ll ask again when I get to the half-way mark in my story and when I have a better discribtion of what I mean.

Review please!