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The Visitor

By: evileric
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The Visitor

The Visitor

By Evil Eric

DISCLAIMER: Author claims no ownership of any persons, places, or concepts appearing herein, and receives no profit from the publishing or distribution of this material.

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Soryu Asuka Langley was in a bad mood, as usual. She had just gotten back to Misato’s apartment after a long day of synch tests, and Shinji’s synch ratio was still catching up to hers. At least that little bitch Rei wasn’t there to see it. For some reason, Asuka didn’t think she could have stood that. There she’d be, losing her lead right in front of everyone, and there’d be Rei, staring at her with no expression at all. Who knew what she thought?

“Misato, I’m home!” she said with fake enthusiasm. All she wanted now was to get out of her uniform and take a long bath.

“Mmmm...good morning, Asuka,” Misato mumbled sleepily.

Asuka walked into the kitchen and found Misato there, hunched over the table. Her eyes were barely open, her purple hair was tangled, and her hand was holding her morning beer, which she obviously hadn’t taken a sip of yet.

“Morning?” Asuka said. “Hello, it’s five in the afternoon!”

“Mmmm,” Misato mumbled again. She sat up and chugged the beer, at which point her demeanor instantly changed. “Yee-haw! Now that’s how to wake up!”

Asuka shook her head. “You’ve got to stop working the night shift.”

“Aww, leave me alone,” Misato said. “Hey, where’s Shinji?”

“How the hell should I know? You think I wanted to see his face the whole way back here?!” Asuka grumbled and stormed out of the room. She walked into the bathroom and turned on the hot water. She was taking off her shoes when Misato staggered in.

“Do you mind?” Asuka said. “I’m about to take a bath here!”

“No you’re not. I need to you do an errand for me.”

“What?!”

“Where is it...” Misato’s hand fumbled around in her pockets. Whatever she was looking for, she didn’t find it. Then she reached into her bra, and her face lit up. “There! I need you to deliver this,” she said, handing Asuka a plastic card. It was a security card, just like hers, except it had Rei’s picture on it.

“This is Wonder Girl’s!” Asuka said. “Why don’t you give it to her?”

“Because I have to leave for work in half an hour, and she won’t be at headquarters again until next week. She hasn’t been feeling well since the tenth angel’s attack.”

“She’s probably just in awe of my superior combat skills!” Asuka proclaimed. “Besides, why don’t you get Shinji to do it?”

“Something about you not wanting to see his face the whole way back here.”

“Rrrrgh! All right, fine, I’ll take this stupid thing to Wonder Girl!”

Misato smiled and walked into her bedroom to change for work. Even through the door, she could still hear Asuka kicking the bathtub and screaming about how unfair everything was.

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“Why do I always have to be the one to do this?” Asuka grumbled to herself. “And it had to be Rei, of all people...”

Just why she didn’t want to see Rei, she wasn’t sure.

It wasn’t a long train ride to the district of Tokyo-3 where Rei lived, but it was almost at the edge of old Tokyo. The streets and sidewalks were still cracked from where the tsunami caused by the Second Impact had struck, fifteen years ago. The apartment buildings were lined up in a long row, crumbling and covered in dust and garbage. It was amazing, and stupid, that anyone lived here in the first place.

Anyone but Rei, Asuka thought. She didn’t seem to care what anyone thought...not even what she herself thought.

“Sheesh, what kind of way to live is this?” Asuka asked herself, staring up at the building where Rei lived. No answer came, and she could only sneer at everything and walk up the decrepit stairs.

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BUZZ.

“Hey, Wonder Girl. Where are you?”

There was no answer.

“Rrrrgh, dammit! I know you’re in there, say something!”

Still no answer.

“Have it your way, I’m coming in whether you like it or not!”

Asuka kicked open the door to Rei’s apartment. She was prepared to scream her ass off at the First Child, but when she saw the state of the apartment, all she could do was stare.

She’d been in Shinji’s room a few times, and was amazed that one person could own so few things. But Rei had even less than Shinji. Other than the furniture that came with the room, all she could see was a bag full of schoolwork, a box full of bloody bandages, and a few beakers filled with water. How could someone live like this?

Rei herself wasn’t there. At least, nowhere Asuka could see. For all she hadn’t wanted to see Wonder Girl, Asuka was surprisingly disappointed that she’d come all this way not even to see a trace of her.

“Helloooooo, is anyone here?” she called.

There was no answer. Asuka screwed up her face in anger.

“Dammit! If you’re here then answer me!”

“What?” asked a quiet voice.

Asuka turned around and did an instant face-fault. There was Ayanami, fresh out of the shower and wearing nothing but a towel. It wasn’t even wrapped around her, but draped over her shoulders so that it barely covered her breasts and crotch. Asuka’s jaw hung open at this shocking display of immodesty. She knew the Japanese didn’t appreciate privacy as much as Germans or Americans, but this was too much!

“Mein Gott!” she exclaimed. “What the hell’s wrong with you?!”

“What do you mean?” Rei asked, her voice monotone and barely above a whisper, like always.

“Rrrrgh! Put your damn clothes on!” Asuka yelled, picking up a school shirt and tossing it at the blue-haired girl.

Rei caught the shirt and held it in front of her, but to Asuka’s chagrin, did not put it on. Instead, she just stood there, staring blank-faced at the redhead like she always did. Asuka began fuming again.

“What are you just standing there for?!” she yelled. “You think I want to see you without any clothes on?!”

For a moment Rei didn’t say anything. Then she whispered, “Then why are you still here?”

Asuka stared, then stuttered, then paced around the room with her fists clenched. How dare this blue-headed bimbo insinuate that she was...attracted to her! If that was what she thought, there was something seriously wrong with her. By God, the only reason she was still her in the first place was...what? She tried to remember what she was doing here, but all she could think of was what was behind that towel Rei was wearing. NO! She couldn’t start down that road, or she might never turn back. Wait, the card! That was it.

Asuka dug around in her pocket and found the slip of plastic. She strode over to Rei’s dresser and put it down, then pulled her hand back as if it had been stung. There was a white cotton bra stained with blood.

“There!” she said. “I came here to give you your new ID card, and I did, so I’m getting out of-“

She turned around to leave, but suddenly Rei’s face was an inch from hers. And she had tossed the shirt and towel onto her bed. Asuka was paralyzed by the seductive look in the First Child’s eyes, and the idea of what she would see if she lowered her own.

“Why are you really here, Pilot Soryu?” Rei asked, her breath cold on Asuka’s face.

This was the point where Asuka would usually blow up in her face, but for some reason the impulse got stuck as a lump in her throat. Rei took a tiny step forward, forcing Asuka to take a step back. She found herself backed into the dresser and threw her arms back to catch her balance. The beaker of water clattered to the ground and spilled, but neither girl seemed to notice.

“Why-why do you always c-call me Pilot Soryu?” Asuka stammered, not knowing what else to say.

“Because that is who you are,” Rei said, running her hands up Asuka’s arms and letting them rest on her shoulders.

Rei’s hands drifted up to Asuka’s cheeks, and she leaned forward and gently pressed her lips to Asuka’s. The German girl was literally trembling, but powerless to resist Rei’s touch.

‘Mein Gott, she’s kissing me...she’s kissing me! What am I gonna do her lips are so soft she’s kissing me mein Gott mein Gott yes no yes no...’

Asuka’s eyes slowly closed as Rei’s tongue licked all around her lips before slipping between them. The redhead’s arm slipped off the top of the dresser. She could feel Rei licking all around her mouth before coaxing her own tongue out of hiding. Soon she was matching Rei’s every caress, and she reached around to run her hands through Rei’s soft hair.

After what seemed like forever, Rei pulled away, and what Asuka saw shocked her. The First Child’s ruby eyes were sparkling, and she was smiling gently.

“You don’t need this right now,” Rei said, undoing the red ribbon around Asuka’s neck.

A part of her mind was still screaming silently, but Asuka got the idea and began sliding off the straps of her skirt. Rei helped, crouching to pull the green garment down as she planted kisses all over Asuka’s neck. Asuka stepped out of the skirt, leaving her in only her shirt and underwear. Rei placed her hands on Asuka’s shoulders, turned her around, and pushed her softly onto the bed. The blue-haired girl herself followed, perching on all fours above Asuka.

Rei’s hands found Asuka’s breasts, kneading them through the fabric of her shirt. Asuka writhed in pleasure, biting down on her knuckle. Rei began unbuttoning Asuka’s shirt, and when she had finally undone all the buttons, Asuka thrust her chest out so she could remove the flimsy garment. Unlike Rei, Asuka liked to think she had a certain fashion sense, and wouldn’t have allowed them to bury her wearing plain underwear. Her bra and panties were light pink lace, in floral patterns. From the slight look of surprise on Rei’s face, Asuka assumed she found this interesting.

Rei traced the lace edges of Asuka’s bra with her finger, leaning down to run her tongue across the redhead’s collarbone. As Rei worked her way up, Asuka realized the position she was in. No way she was letting the First Child outdo her, not even now. Her hands crept across her stomach and reached up to take hold of Rei’s bare breasts. At first she squeezed them gently, then ran her fingers across them, just barely touching the pale skin. Rei licked around Asuka’s ear just as Asuka pinched Rei’s nipples, and Asuka heard a sudden sharp intake of breath.

Apparently the blue-haired girl decided it was time to up the ante, because she reached around behind Asuka and fumbled with the clasp of her bra. But she was obviously having trouble concentrating while Asuka continued to tease her pink little nipples, as her hands slipped several times before finally undoing the bra.

The bra was casually tossed away, and Rei began to return the favor Asuka had been doing for her. She moved more into a sitting position, taking her chest out of Asuka’s reach. Asuka’s breasts were not quite as large as Rei’s, but they were just as firm, if not more so. Asuka’s nipples were stiff and ready for attention, which Rei was more than willing to provide.

She nuzzled the Second Child’s left breast with her nose, running her cute little tongue across the bottom of it. Meanwhile her hand sneaked up and gave Asuka’s right breast a playful grope. Asuka yelped in surprise, then gave Rei a rare smile and leaned up to kiss her forehead.

Rei traced circles around Asuka’s breast with her tongue before planting a kiss right on top of her nipple. Asuka gasped again, and Rei’s lips fastened around the hard bud. One of her hands continued playing with Asuka’s other breast, and the other one crept down and slipped into Asuka’s panties.

When Asuka felt two of Rei’s fingers probing at her entrance, the assault on her erogenous zones became too much to stand anymore.

“Wonder Girl...oh, god, Wonder Girl!” Asuka moaned as she reached orgasm.

She lay there on Rei’s bed, panting and out of breath, and Rei sat on her thighs. The First Child pulled her fingers out of Asuka and put them in her mouth. She looked like she was tasting candy for the first time. She leaned over again and planted a kiss on Asuka’s cheek, letting her tongue linger across the German girl’s lips.

“We aren’t finished yet,” Rei’s soft voice said in Asuka’s ear.

For a moment Asuka wondered what she was talking about, but then Rei moved farther down the bed, pulling Asuka’s legs out from under her. She lifted them up and ran her hands across them a few times, finding them pleasantly smooth. Her fingers hooked under the lacy hem of Asuka’s soaked panties, which she pulled off in one fluid motion. Rei held the panties in front of her face and inhaled deeply.

Asuka looked at the blue-haired girl from between her own legs, and saw that Rei had a ravenous look on her face the likes of which she’d never seen before.

‘She’s not going to...no way, not Ayanami Rei...holy shit, she is!’

The blue-haired girl lowered her head between Asuka’s spread legs and inhaled the scent of her delicate flower. She gave it an experimental lick, and Asuka screamed like a bomb had gone off inside her. Seeing the reaction she was getting, and finding more of the same taste she had found pleasant at first, Rei licked deeper, sliding her tongue into Asuka’s vagina.

“Aaaahh! Yes! Keep doing it!” Asuka yelled.

Rei increased her tempo, her tongue writhing and lashing around inside Asuka’s womanhood, trying to suck up every bit of moisture she could find. Asuka ran her hands through Rei’s soft, azure hair, trying to pull the other girl’s head even closer. Rei pressed her lips against Asuka’s lower lips, lovingly nuzzling Asuka’s tender skin. Her tongue fluttered across the folds of Asuka’s sex like a hummingbird’s wings.

Asuka continued to vocalize her ecstacy, her moans of arousal just as loud as if she was yelling at Shinji. Rei gave Asuka’s snatch a last, drawn-out lick, and chose a new target for her attack. Rei raised her lips and fastened them around Asuka’s clitoris and sucked it vigorously.

“Yes, right there!” Asuka screamed, and began cursing in German.

She arched her back, thrusting her pelvis into the air, and Rei kept her mouth fastened to Asuka’s clit. Asuka’s hands traveled upward and found her breasts, kneading them hard and pinching her nipples. Rei followed with her own hands, letting them leave Asuka’s thighs and running them up along the German girl’s side. Finally they reached her breasts, where Asuka guided them in a matched caress.

Meanwhile she continued to stimulate Asuka’s love button, alternately bathing it with wet kisses and circling gently around it with the tip of her tongue. When she felt Asuka’s hips start to shake, Rei nibbled her clit and tugged gently on it with her teeth.

“Reeeeiiiii!!!” With a screech, Asuka came, and liquid gushed out of her vagina. The startled Rei pulled back in surprise, and her face and chest were soaked in Asuka’s cum.

Rei traced a finger through the clear fluid and licked it seductively off her finger. Asuka propped herself up on her elbows, and Rei offered her a finger covered in her own cum. Hesitantly, she popped the finger into her mouth. It was sticky and sweet...and surprisingly good.

The First Child reached around and pulled Asuka’s head to her chest, and Asuka began licking her cum off of Rei’s breasts. Her tongue rolled around Rei’s nipples and her hands explored every inch of the blue-haired girl’s alabaster skin. Rei held Asuka’s head to her bosom like a newborn child.

“Did you enjoy that?” Rei asked quietly.

Asuka’s smile widened dangerously. “You think you’re getting off that easily?” she said.

“What?”

“Did you forget who you’re dealing with?” Asuka said, giving Rei a cocky look. “I’m Soryu Asuka Langley...the best EVA pilot in the world! And I’m not going to let you show me up, I have a reputation, after all!”

With that, Asuka flipped Rei onto her back and loomed over her with a ravenous glint in her eye. It had felt good to have all that attention paid to her, but now that she was sated her dominant personality was once again asserting itself. And even though this was new territory for her, she was used to never showing fear or doubt.

While Rei had taken a slow and sensual approach to her lover’s breasts, Asuka preferred a faster, almost frantic approach. Rei gasped quietly, feeling tongue and fingers switching wildly back and forth between her nipples. At the same time, there seemed to be a dozen hands caressing every part of her body all at once.

Rei was breathing quickly, barely able to handle the sensory overload. Then, without warning, it stopped. She couldn’t feel Asuka touching her anymore, and opened her crimson eyes a crack. The Second Child was still looming over her, but sadistically waiting until she had Rei’s attention. Once she had it, she placed her hands under Rei’s butt and hefted it into the air. Rei, who was caught off guard, barely had time to get her feet underneath her. Asuka ducked under Rei’s legs and positioned herself between them. She brought up one of her hands and idly twisted her finger through Rei’s blue pubic hair, tugging on it gently and making Rei squeal.

Asuka decided the moment was right. She planted a kiss on Rei’s furry mound before burying her face in the other girl’s loins. Rei shouted louder than Asuka had ever heard her before as the German girl’s tongue licked up and down her entrance, teasing and probing her outer lips in a frenzy. Asuka brushed against Rei’s clit with her nose, then thrust her tongue as far as it would go into the First Child’s vagina. She noticed that Rei tasted different from herself-a little sour, but not enough to be unpleasant.

“Pilot S-Soryu...Asukaaaaaa!” Rei screeched.

Sensing that her lover was close, Asuka went for the kill. She replaced her tongue with two of her fingers, and fastened her lips around Rei’s clit, tugging and nibbling on it as hard as she could without hurting Rei. Rei’s pelvis began to quiver, and Asuka added a third finger, pumping them in and out quickly, swirling her tongue around Rei’s love button. Rei uttered one last high-pitched scream before reaching orgasm. Asuka licked up all of Rei’s cum and gave her mound one last kiss before finally lowering Rei’s butt back down to the bed.

Asuka crawled over to where the exhausted First Child lay and wrapped her arms around her. They looked into each other’s eyes and their lips met for one last time. Each tasted herself in the other’s mouth.

Rei’s bed wasn’t built for two, but the two lovers stayed entwined as Asuka reached down and pulled the blanket over them. They stayed that way the rest of the evening and all night. There were no words spoken then, and none that needed to be spoken.

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When Asuka awoke, it was to the sound of rushing water. The sound stopped shortly after she realized what it was, and when she opened her eyes, she saw Rei stepping out of the shower again, just as she had when she arrived the day before.

The day before...what? Wait a minute, this was Rei’s apartment! And they had spent all of last night...oh, no.

The impulse to scream that the Second Child had fought down the whole time she and Rei were making love was coming back with a vengeance. Rei was standing there, naked as she had been last night, drying her hair as she looked in the mirror. Asuka remembered that she was naked too. Painfully, she fought the scream back down her throat. She remembered that she had not only accepted Rei’s advances, she had returned them. It was a little too late to run away in terror.

She shifted on Rei’s bed, causing a small creak. The blue-haired girl turned and noticed that Asuka was awake. They stood staring at each other for several seconds. Then, strangely, it was Rei who broke the silence.

“You called me my name,” Rei said.

“S-so did you,” Asuka said back.

Asuka rarely used Rei’s name to her face, since she always called her Wonder Girl. And she’d never heard Rei call her anything but Pilot Soryu. For that matter, Rei always called Shinji Pilot Ikari. Asuka wouldn’t be surprised if Rei called herself Pilot Ayanami in her own thoughts.

Rei walked across the apartment to her dresser and began putting on clean underwear. Asuka’s clothes were still on the floor near the bed.

“How did you...how’d you know I would do that with you?” Asuka asked.

“Because I know you,” Rei said with her back turned.

“Huh? What’s that supposed to mean?”

“I know you better than you know yourself,” Rei said, now buttoning on her white shirt. “What you want more than anything else is to have others love you, but you’re afraid to get close to them. You don’t want to be betrayed again.”

Asuka sat up, barely aware that her breasts were no longer under the bed sheets. Rei’s tone was starting to annoy her. Who the hell was she to say that she knew Asuka better than Asuka knew herself?

“What are you talking about?” she asked stiffly.

Rei was pulling on her skirt now. “Your mother’s betrayal.”

If Rei’s previous statement had lit a fuse in Asuka’s mind, this last one set off the whole crate of explosives. The German girl jumped out of Rei’s bed, grabbed Rei by the shoulders, spun her around to face her, and glared at her. It didn’t occur to her that yesterday she had been clothed and Rei had not, and now the opposite was true. She was furious.

“What do you know about my mother?!” she shouted in Rei’s face. “What makes you so much of an expert on me, huh?!”

“I read your personnel file,” Rei said impassively. “I can read the meaning behind your actions.”

“Then why did you do...that...with me?!”

Rei’s expression was blank and unreadable as always. “To help you learn how to act on your subconscious desires. If you do not, you will never be able to communicate with others or pilot your EVA as efficiently as possible.”

Asuka felt like a car had just fallen on her. “You had sex with me because you thought it would make me a better pilot?!”

Rei didn’t say anything. Asuka slapped her as hard as she could. A red mark appeared on the blue-haired girl’s cheek, and her eyes widened slightly.

“I don’t need your help to be a better pilot! I’m already the best pilot there is! And I don’t need to be loved by anyone, especially not you! I hate you! I hate you!”

She turned on her heel, picked up her clothes, and stormed off into Rei’s bathroom. A minute later, she came out fully dressed and dashed out the front door. Rei didn’t moved an inch. She watched Asuka leave in a rage without saying anything.

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Shinji stood at Misato’s kitchen counter, busily working to make lunch for himself and Asuka. He was a little worried about her. She hadn’t shown up last night, and they had to leave the apartment in 15 minutes to be on time for school. Asuka still wasn’t there. Misato had shown up sometime early that morning and gone straight to sleep, like she always did when she worked the night shift. So Shinji had no way to know where Asuka was or when she was getting back.

But just as he was thinking about it, the front door slid open and the Second Child thundered in, sounding more pissed off than usual. She was still wearing her school uniform, which was dirty and ruffled. Her hair was messed up, and she smelled...weird.

“Oooh!” Asuka shouted, kicking the wall.

Shinji winced as if he’d been the one who was kicked. A drowsy groan came from Misato’s room, and the apartment was silent again except for the sound of Asuka fuming. Shinji took a chance and spoke.

“Umm...Asuka?” he asked.

“What?!”

“Are you...are you OK?”

“Do I look OK, you idiot?! Hell no, I’m not OK! Rei...that little bitch! Verdamnt!”

Shinji was about to ask what Ayanami had to do with anything, but Asuka stomped off into her room and slid the door violently closed. Shinji felt a new kind of panic now. He knocked on Asuka’s door.

“Hey, Asuka! We’ve gotta go to school!”

“I’m not going to school today! Go by yourself! Give my lunch to Toji or something!”

Shinji grabbed the lunches and his bag, and ran out of there like the hounds of hell were after him. All but alone in the apartment, Asuka kicked the wall and screamed until her foot and throat were too sore to continue.

End.

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