The Power To See

Due to my own dissatisfaction with this fic, I have decided to temporarily remove it. It will be edited, revamped, maybe even rewritten entirely, and will be posted again under a better name. Because I hate the name it's got. I realize my original character comes across at first as a Mary Sue, and though people have assured me they were pleasantly surprised with how she turned out to NOT be one of those, I wish to make an effort to transform her into someone with more substance. Also, it was brought to my attention that there are a couple of mistakes here and there, such as the way Chris refers to Ryan (though I did explain that this was not so much a mistake as a bilingual tendancy); coicidentally, I am removing all Japanese words and phrases from the fic because, well, D is the only Asian guy in the series, and he's CHINESE. Everybody else and their grandma in Petshop is American, and I'm going to endeavor to keep them that way.

The fic's second incarnation will probably be longer, will hopefully flow better, and will possibly make a much better read. To all of those who read and liked the original version, simply request it and I will keep it posted here (I will still post the new version).

Thanks to anyone who cares, and to all of those who don't...XP I don't care!