Generic Trip to the Hot Spring

Generic Manga: Generic Trip to the Hot Spring

Generic manga is based on the characters from How Not to Draw Manga, plus a few of my own. The characters are based on the stereotypical characters in manga and anime. Don't go looking for stories of the original; they don't exist. Generic Manga is my own creation, not that of the character creators. GM spoofs many cliches in manga. Here they take the generic trip to the hot spring, where things naturally flow... orgy.

Characters:
The men:
1. Chip Amiable - generic likable boy. Chip always wants to be "the greatest at whatever he's doing." Always happy-go-lucky and occasionally clueless, this young man is often the recipient of the girls' affections.
2. Guy Iconic - generic all-action hero. Guy's the man to call when you have a mission to accomplish. He is often over-the-top and eager to prove his battle skills. Guy often is obsessed by some food item.
3. Haiwanto Ghetsum- generic pervert.
Haiwanto wants nothing more in life than to have a beautiful woman in love with him. Unfortunately for him, he *always* goes about this the wrong way, causing women to think of him as something between primordial ooze and lawyers. Name is original.
4. Wus Nospine - generic wimp. Wus couldn't fight his way out of a paper bag. He's ever frightened of everyone and everything. In a fight, he gets his ass kicked within seconds of the opening punch. For some weird reason, women seem to like him, but hate his wimpy attitude. Original name.
5. Trey Despondent - generic slick villain. He would strangle cute kittens if he thought it would make someone unhappy. He's perennially grouchy and angry. He makes complicated plans and tries his best to spoil things for the heroes.
The Ladies:
1. Jenny Limber - generic dim bulb heroine. Jenny's not the sharpest tool in the shed, but she's very sexy, so that makes up for it. She can't cook, but can clean and do other things. Woe be unto anyone that keeps her from her man.
2. Katie Saccharine - generic obscenely cheerful girl. Even in the darkest hour, Katie can be called upon to spread good cheer and mirth. She's so cheerful and happy all the time that it makes one want to puke. In the group, she's usually the one who cooks and cleans, since she's usually the best at it.
3. Dorothy Petulant - generic angry girl. Dorothy is a raging case of PMS 24-7-365. This woman becomes extremely angry at the drop of a hat. She'll readily employ her razor-sharp tongue to use words that cut to the bone. For her, love is, at best, an 'I-hate-you-and-I-love-you' thing. Original name.
4. Allison Wannakiss- generic nympho. Allison wants a good man in her life, and is eager to do *anything* to achieve that goal. Unfortunately, like her male counterpart Haiwanto Ghetsum, she goes about things the wrong way as well. In reality, this girl would have more men worshiping her than she could ever handle. Original name.
5. Vix Essenem - generic slab of cheesecake babe. If you need a tall, hot babe that is willing to go around in a low-cut blouse and microskirt, Vix is your woman. Usually evil, Vix uses her sexual prowess to her advantage.

Chip Amiable had won the day at the spa in a contest. He announced to everyone that he was going to take everyone to the hot spring that Sunday. Dorothy, of course, was against going.
"You are just using this as an excuse to spy on us naked." Dorothy said.
"That's not true! I just want to share my good fortune with my friends!" Chip replied. Dorothy didn't buy his story for a minute.
"Yea right. You're just a pervert." Dorothy retorted.
"No, I'm the pervert. He's the likable lad." Haiwanto said. Dorothy responded by smacking Haiwanto in the jaw.
"Nobody asked you!" Dorothy replied.
"Did I mention this comes with a makeover for the ladies?" Chip asked. Dorothy gave in after a small argument.
"If I catch any of you trying to peek in, you will not live to regret it!" Dorothy said.

They took the train to the station and then hiked about a kilometer to the spa. When they got there, Dorothy complained about being tired. Katie's good cheer kept the others going. However, fate had a nasty surprise for them. Trey Despondent and Vix Essenem were there. They had just bought out the place and were going to turn it into a toxic waste dump.
"You bastard! We hiked from the station all the way here!" Dorothy exclaimed.
"Yes... Well, that was for nothing." Trey replied. That was exactly the opposite of what Dorothy wanted to hear.
"Oh please, Trey... We've come a long way to have a day here. Can't you let us in?" Katie pleaded. Her look and tone could melt 99% of the hearts out there. However, Trey was in the 1% that had no heart. He merely laughed at Katie.
"Bah! Your pathetic attempts have no effect on me! If you want a bath, you'll have to hike to the next hot spring, which is 25 kilometers away!" Trey said.

Guy made the first move by striking Trey with his fist. Vix tried to retaliate, but a kick to the tits from Dorothy sent Vix reeling. Trey and Guy fought for a bit, and Guy ended up winning. Trey fell to the floor with a thud. Vix followed shortly thereafter. Like every time he saw a fight, Wus panicked and hid. It took a bit of coaxing by Katie to get him out from under the counter.
"Jeez, grow some balls, will you?" Dorothy said.
"It's over, guys. Let's go in." Guy said.

They went into the separate dressing areas and undressed. Any straight man would have killed to see these four hot, tight vixens naked. The youngest was 18-year-old Katie, and the oldest was 21-year-old Dorothy. Each one of them has a set of tits that are big, and an ass tight enough to bounce a quarter. Dorothy was the first to test the spring.
"It feels good, girls. Let's go in." Dorothy said. All of them entered the water and relaxed.

On the men's side, a straight woman would have gotten very wet from seeing four guys with hard chests and long and wide cocks naked. All of them were bishonen (although in manga, guys are a hot stud.) Wus covered himself up after undressing.
"Hey, what's with the modesty?" Guy asked.
"Well..." Wus started.
"Don't worry, you're among friends here." Guy said. They went out to their side of the hot spring and entered.

Once in the hot springs on the guy's side, Haiwanto started checking over the fence that separated the men from the women.
"What are you doing, Haiwanto?" Chip asked.
"There's always a hole in the fence in these hot spring spas! I just gotta find it!" Haiwanto said excitedly.
"Don't! The girls will get mad at us!" Wus said in fear.
"Oh, you're just being paranoid again, Wus. It's our duty as hetero men to spy on the girls bathing!" Haiwanto said.

On the other side, however, there was someone of similar mind: Allison Wannakiss wanted to spy on the boys bathing.
"Come on! A bunch of cute guys and you don't want to see them naked? What's wrong with you, Dorothy?" Allison asked.
"If you see a guy naked, he's gonna shove his cock in your face and demand you suck it. No thank you." Dorothy said in her usual upset tone.
"That's not necessarily a bad thing, now is it?" Allison replied. She too had found the hole and was about to peer inside it.

"Well Haiwanto, what do you see?" Guy Iconic asked as Haiwanto looked inside the hole.
"An eye." Haiwanto said, as did Allison. Both of them pulled back. Dorothy slammed the fence, which shook at her blow. Wus scrambled into a corner and covered up. He knew an irate Dorothy was like a raging tornado.
"GAH!! YOU FILTHY PERVERT!!! STOP LOOKING AT US NAKED NOW!!!" Dorothy shouted over the fence.
"Man, I really wanted to see Chip and Guy naked..." Allison lamented. Dorothy was still seething with rage.
"I KNEW YOU'D TRY TO PULL THIS KIND OF SHIT ON US!! STOP IT RIGHT NOW!!" Dorothy screamed. Guy decided he had taken enough of Dorothy.
"So why is it o.k. for you girls to look at us naked, but not vice versa!?" Guy shouted back. Dorothy, not really having a valid counter to Guy's point, continued her angry tirade.
"THAT IS BESIDE THE POINT!! YOU PERVERTS ARE ENGAGING IN BEHAVIOR I DON'T LIKE!!" Dorothy shouted.
"Uh... if they can see us naked, shouldn't we like cover up or something?" Jenny asked. Her question went unanswered.
"YOU BASTARDS STOP IT NOW!!" Dorothy shouted. She banged on the fence again. This time, however, it collapsed. Everyone got a full view of everyone else completely naked. The guys got to see eight luscious, copious tits, four tight pussies and four incredible asses. The girls got to see four hard chests, four long cocks and four buns of steel. Haiwanto and Allison immediately got nosebleeds, and then passed out.

Dorothy and Katie's faces turned completely red, and they went scrambling for towels. Guy and Chip were of the same mindset. Jenny merely sat there.
"Jenny, the guys can see you naked!" Dorothy said as she wrapped a towel around herself. It took a moment for this to sink into Jenny's mind.
"Oh... so should I cover up?" Jenny asked.
"My God you are dumber than a bag of hammers. OF COURSE YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO COVER YOURSELF UP!!" Dorothy shouted the last sentence at Jenny. Jenny casually went and got a towel, covering herself up.

"Hold it! This is hentai! When we see each other naked, we're supposed to get horny and want to make love!" The voice was Haiwanto Ghetsum's. He was standing up and holding his nose. Dorothy's immediate response was to give him an uppercut, sending him high into the air.
"Hey... he had a good idea there." Allison said. She was holding her nose as well.
"Not you too! Jeez, has everyone lost their sanity around here?" Dorothy said, straining to control her anger.
"Well, sex is supposed to be good. I say we try it out." Katie said. "I call dibs on Chip."
"Aw man, I wanted Chip!" Allison protested. After she said that, Haiwanto landed in front of her with a splash.
"You should relax, Dorothy." Katie said. "After all, that's what we came here for."
"Katie, all the guys saw us naked." Dorothy replied.
"Well, we saw them naked, so it's a fair trade." Katie said. "Besides, Chip's cock looked very big."
"Sure Katie. I'd love to make love to you." Chip said.
"Oh, don't tell me that you're thinking about sex too." Dorothy replied in disgust.
"Come on! If you don't want it, just go." Haiwanto said. Dorothy responded by smacking him over the fence. Allison stopped her from going completely ballistic.
"Dorothy, you can't stay away from guys forever. We're all genetically programmed to desire good-looking members of our sexual preference." Allison said.
"O.k., Fine." Dorothy said. Haiwanto then came back in again. He had a clothespin on his nose and one in his hand.
"Where did you... On second thought, I don't want to know." Dorothy said.
"I want Guy!" Jenny said.
"What a choice. The wimp or the pervert." Dorothy said. Haiwanto went up to Allison.
"I'd really be honored if you were to do me." Haiwanto said to Allison.
"Do I have to do him? He's a pervert." Allison asked.
"Well, you're the nympho, so you've got something in common already." Katie said.
"Well, I don't know..." Allison said. Haiwanto then threw his arms around her and planted his lips on hers. They tasted each other's tender charms, and couldn't get enough of it. When they came up for air, Allison took Hiwanto's spare clothespin and put it on her nose.
"Man of mine, you'd better satisfy me completely here." Allison said as she reached into the towel covering Haiwanto. Haiwanto did the same to Allison. Dorothy frowned.
"Stuck with the wimp. Wonderful." She said.

Towels came off and libidos came on. Haiwanto had brought a couple of boxes of condoms with him, as was his custom. He passed them out and everyone went for privates, except for Wus. He was still curled up in a ball in the corner.
"Hey Wus, we're having an orgy here. Get with the program!" Dorothy said.
"You're... Not... mad...?" Wus asked.
"I will be if you don't get over here and eat my pussy now!" Dorothy replied. Wus did as he was told; of course, he had a hard time pleasing Dorothy.
"You're doing it all wrong! Slow down and go deeper!" Dorothy said.
"I'm sorry; I've never done this before." Wus said. Being the skittish wimp, he had no clue about how to do anything with a woman... Except get his ass kicked by one.

On the other hand, however, all the other guys were eating pussy expertly. Haiwanto had an easy time with it, as he had watched a lot of porn and yuri. Then again, touching Allison down there would get her very wet very fast.
"Ooh yes! More!" Allison gasped as she had Haiwanto reaming her tunnel of love with his tongue. She couldn't get enough of his oral, and her vocalizations make this very evident. Meanwhile, Guy had his tongue inside Jenny's slick hole, making her moan softly. Jenny really liked his tongue on her clit. Katie also liked Chip's expert oral skills. It took Wus a bit to get it right, but once he did, Dorothy was moaning with the other girls. Allison was the first to start a 69. She ordered Haiwanto to turn around, and he eagerly did so. Allison took Hiwanto's 20 cm cock into her mouth and started sucking it. He couldn't get enough of Allison's cocksucking. Everyone else followed suit, with Guy getting a blowjob from Jenny while Katie sucked on Chip's 23 cm of love stick. None of the guys wanted their blowjobs to stop. Everyone was moaning and gasping as they did their 69. Dorothy seemed a bit reluctant to suck Wus' 19 cm boner, but did so to return the head she was getting. Everyone loved doing the 69 with each other, and they did it for a long time. Then Allison got the next phase going. She turned around.
"I want that monster cock of yours in me now." She said. Four long, hard cocks got condoms on them, and then found their way into four hot, tight snatches.

Allison gasped as Hiwanto's throbbing python filled her eager beaver completely.
"Ooh yes... It's huge!" Allison said. She felt her cunt being stretched to its limits. While she had used a dildo before, this was the first time she had a real man inside her. She stared deep into his eyes and saw desire. Elsewhere, Chip was easily driving Katie straight to an orgasm.
"That feels so wonderful inside me! You're going exactly how I want it!" Katie said breathlessly. Guy too was making Jenny very happy, as evidenced by her moaning and gasping. In fact, the only pair having trouble was Dorothy and Wus.
"Deeper. Harder." Dorothy barked out a series of orders for Wus until he got it right. Once he did get it right, however, Dorothy was easy to please. All the guys rammed their peckers deep inside these four tight snatches.
"This is the best! GOD YES!!" Jenny said as she went up and down on Guy's hard trouser snake. It seemed like Guy's cock was specifically designed to fit inside Jenny's quivering slit, and give her the maximum amount of pleasure humanly possible. The same went for Katie and Chip as well.

Everyone fucked for a long time, slowly running his or her hands all over each other. Only Wus didn't touch any private places. Haiwanto, having watched a lot of hentai and yuri, caressed Allison's luscious tits, slowly savoring her sweater meat. Hiwanto's ass was a magnet for Allison's hands, and there was no time while they fucked that she didn't have at least one hand on his rock-hard buns. Haiwanto didn't mind that, however. He had his stiff stick in the tunnel of love of a wonderful woman. Out of all the women, Allison was also the most vocal with her pleasure. Allison moaned and gasped frequently and very loudly. Katie, Jenny and Dorothy moaned and gasped as well, but it was nowhere near the volume of Allison. Haiwanto and Chip also whispered words of encouragement to their lovers, although Allison couldn't hear Haiwanto with all her screaming. Guy merely gave an occasional "Yes..." that Jenny liked. Well, it took them a while, but finally, Allison was the first to come. This make Haiwanto come, as Allison had more than one orgasm. She actually had three in a row, with Haiwanto coming during the second one. Allison screamed loud enough to wake the dead as she climaxed. Chip came next, with Katie achieving her orgasmic delights after he finished. Guy and Jenny climaxed at the same time. Then Wus came, causing Dorothy to climax.

The spa was a mixture of warm water from the spring and orgasmic fluids. Everyone was resting in their respective partner's arms.
"Dorothy, I can't thank you enough for this." Wus said. He figured that if he didn't praise her bed skills, she'd go ballistic on him. The other guys followed suit, praising the abilities of the women. Allison was quick to return Hiwanto's praise.
"Mmm... I've used a vibrator, but having the real thing is much better." Allison moaned into Hiwanto's ear. Truth be told, it was only the first time for Wus. However, He barely managed to satisfy Dorothy. It was a rare sight to see; Dorothy was actually smiling and holding Wus in her arms.
"Well, once you got it right, you were pretty good. I liked it." Dorothy said. It was the first time in her life she had actually said something nice about a guy. Wus smiled at this; he knew it was a major accomplishment just to get Dorothy to stop complaining.
"Thank you, Dorothy. That means a lot to me coming from you." Wus said. They continued to hold each other and praise each other. Haiwanto and Allison wanted more of each other, so they had a second round while the others relaxed and watched. Haiwanto got to shove his hard, condom-covered pole deep into Allison's tight slit again. Together they went down the corridors of pleasure, never slowing down or looking back. They slowly caressed each other, taking slow feels of private places. Allison had another triple climax, while Haiwanto came again in the middle of the second one.

It was about 45 minutes later that everyone dressed and went out to the spa area. Guy Iconic bought everyone a half-liter of milk.
"Milk is always so good for you." Guy said before drinking his milk down. That's when trouble reared its ugly head. Trey Despondent showed up, with the police in tow.
"That's them, officers. They blew in here and used my hot springs without my permission! They didn't pay me either!" Trey said.
"We won a day at this spa, and He wouldn't honor it." Chip said.
"That was made by the old owner! I am not bound by it!" Trey retorted.
"Listen you motherfucker, I am goddamned sick of you trying to ruin our fun! You bought this place out just to keep us from having a relaxing day at the spa!" Dorothy replied in her usual angry tone. Katie then gave her sad puppy eyes to the policeman.
"We never meant to hurt anyone. We just wanted to have what we won. This guy is always being mean and trying to ruin our fun." Katie said. The policeman was crying the twin waterfalls as Katie and Chip gave him the sad puppy eyes.
"Oh you two are just so cute! Who could say no to those sad puppy eyes?" The policeman said. Trey sneered at Chip.
"You say I'm evil, and there you go..." Trey said.
"We use our abilities only for good, Trey. Defeating you is always good." Chip replied.
"Bah! Curse you all! Well, you haven't seen the last of Trey Despondent!" Trey sneered as he left.

Well, at the end of the day, our heroes hiked back to the train station and went home. Katie and Chip continued to date, as did Haiwanto and Allison and Jenny and Guy. Dorothy and Wus never developed into a couple, but had sporadic romance every so often. Trey sold the hot spring back to the original owners. They all lived generically ever after.

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