One Hell of a Show

Disclaimer: I don’t own any characters from Beck: Mongolian Chop Squad or anything else.


Notes: This is my very first fan fiction, so criticism is welcome so I can improve. I’m writing this because I like the show Beck (Mongolian Chop Squad) and there are no stories on AFF. Shocking I know.




One Hell of a Show
By: Mephiston


It was a beautiful night as Koyuki walked towards the club he and the rest of the band were playing at that night. His telecaster was slung over his shoulder as he walked down the crowded street. This would be his last show he would be playing in Japan before he went to America for the next 6 months and he felt very nervous.

“Hey Koyuki!”

Koyuki spun around to see Maho walking towards him.

“Oh hey Maho, I was hoping you would come to the show. It’s our last one in Japan and I’m glad you could see us.”

“I have even better news for you,” smirked Maho as she moved closer to him, “I’m coming to the States with you guys!”

“Wow that’s amazing”, cried Koyuki.

“Yeah…well someone has to teach you better English and I’m sure as hell not going to let my dumbass brother teach you.”

They both started walking together towards a large redstone building further down the street. Since the news had spread about how they were going to be touring with Dying Breed in American they had got a lot more requests to play in clubs. Koyuki could still hardly believe it was all happening.

They chatted as they walked and Maho slipped her own hand into Koyuki’s making him feel a little nervous. She was becoming such a big name model now and to be seen walking with him was something else that he still had a little trouble believing. Sure they had kissed a few times but she was so casual about that he was often put off guard.
“Okay Koyuki I’ll see you after the show, rock em dead!” yelled Maho as she went to the main entrance while Koyuki headed to the stage entrance.




It was a great show, Koyuki hadn’t made any mistakes at all and the crowd was enthusiastic. As they finished their last song, and the crowd started to depart, Maho walked over to the band.

“Great show guys, especially Yuji and you Koyuki,” she smiled brightly. As the band started to pack up she moved closer to Koyuki and whispered to him, “ Hey…can I talk to you after everybody’s left?”

“Uh…yeah sure, just give me a sec,” he said.

Unfortunately Ryusuke overheard them and he did his usual joke about giving Koyuki a condom and once again he got smacked by his sister. But no one noticed that that she very subtly stole the condom from him as well.



As Koyuki and Maho walked towards the subway station talking about the show, he couldn’t help but notice that Maho seemed to be standing a lot closer to him then usual and as they got to the turnstile she gave him a kiss full on the lips. It was at that point that Koyuki finally decided to get some answers.

“Listen Maho…I need to ask you something,” He said, trying to sound as confident as possible. Do…do you see me as a friend or something more?”

“Heh, that my little Koyuki, is for me to know and you to find out.” She said with a small smile on her face.

Maybe it was the way she said “little” or how she once again didn’t give him a straight answer but Koyuki was tired of it all. He was so used to behaving like a polite little Japanese boy; he wanted to act like a man. So it was both a surprise to him and Maho when he reached over and kissed her.

Koyuki couldn’t believe what he had done; he could practically feel the eyes of the people on the subway platform watching him. What surprised him even more though was that Maho wasn’t pushing away she was moving closer to him and Koyuki almost blew his mind when he felt a little tongue push into his mouth.

“Damn Koyuki, what took you so long?” she said softly.

“Is that an answer then?” he said.

“I think so, but let’s just make sure again…” she smirked as she moved her lips to his again. “Hey Koyuki can you take me home?”




As they reached Maho’s large house Koyuki couldn’t help but notice that no lights were on and that there was no car in the driveway.

“Hey Maho are your parents home?” Koyuki asked as they walked up the door.

“Koyuki I like how you are thinking tonight she said wickedly.”

“Oh no! I just was wondering because…”

“Oh shut up and come on in.”

As he sat down on the couch, Maho sat beside him and pushed her face closer to his.

“Hey Koyuki…can you kiss me again…” She whispered.

Thinking on how acting this way had got him this far, Koyuki decided to not think to much and just act. He pushed his lips towards her as he moved his body close. Once again he could feel her little tongue enter his mouth and this time he returned the favor in kind. She wrapped her arms around his shoulders and gave a little moan as they moved together.

As they continued to make out, Koyuki couldn’t help but think about lucky a guy he was. Here he was on a couch making out with a beautiful, smart and talented girl and she felt and tasted so good. That was when he felt her hand tug at his shirt, trying to take it off. He was as nervous as he helped her with it and then felt a surge of electricity as she latched her mouth onto his neck and started to move lower.

“Oh god Maho, that feels so good…”he breathed as she kissed him.

“Can you help me out of mine Koyuki?” She pouted as she looked up at him.

Koyuki almost fainted when he heard that, his cock was almost rock hard and he was starting to wish he had taken the condom that Ryusuke had given him. He moved closer to Maho and slowly helped her take the t-shirt off her. Her bra was a simple thing, just plain white but to Koyuki it was the sexiest thing he had ever seen especially with Maho looking at him with a blush on her cheeks.

They went back to making out again and this time using all his willpower Koyuki moved his hands to her breasts and she moaned as he massaged them. It was at this point that Maho grabbed the crotch of his jeans with an almost feral look on her face.

“M-Maho?”

“Koyuki…can I?”

Taking a deep breath Koyuki nodded and undid the button and lowered the zipper. Hesitantly Maho reached her hand inside his pants and felt the hot hard flesh of his dick. Koyuki gasped at the contact and pushed his pants down even further. Maho then pushed his boxers down and gazed for the first time at his dick. It must have been about 7 inches and she had never felt this nervous before, but she couldn’t let Koyuki see that.

With a deep breath she started to stroke his hard cock causing Koyuki to groan in pleasure. Taking that as a good sign she continued sliding her hand from the base all the way to the head before giving it a gentle twist and moved down again.

As Koyuki gazed down at this he moved his hards to her back and undid the straps on her bra. Freeing them he looked upon them with lust and care. He took them into each hand and slowly rubbed them, moving the nipple beneath his fingers in a clockwise motion. He felt Maho groan and saw her rub he legs again and Koyuki almost lost it right there.

Maho could feel his cock and was amazed at the heat of it. Koyuki’s hands on her tits were feeling so good that she just wanted to rip the last of his clothes of and let him take her. She then slowly moved her face down to even ground with this cock and with delicate tongue she lick him from base to tip.Going over every part she could feel Koyuki groan and moan with every movment. Going to the top again she then engulfed the head totally.

Koyuki could hardly believe this was happening. Everything she was doing was feeling so good. It took everything he had to not just grab her head and thrust into her hot tight mouth.

Maho bobbed her head up and down his dick and swirlying her tounge around the shaft and licking the head. She could feel the heat radiating out of him and she wanted to savour the taste of him in her mouth. Sucking harder she started to move her head down even further take the head into the back of her mouth. Then coming back up again she looked Koyuki in the eye and gave him a wink before taking his hands and putting them on the back of her head. She felt so dirty and sexy this way and her pussy inside those tight jeans and panties was screaming for attention. She felt Koyuki start to push down on her head and she once again took his hard cock into her mouth. This time she went even further down on him, starting to feel him enter her throat, it was so sexy and she loved it. She moved her head up and down him faster and felt his hips slightly thrust into her face.

Feeling himself coming close Koyuki reached down with one hand and started to feel her tight ass under her pants while his other kept pressure on Maho’s head. Then with a low growl he said, “Oh god Maho keep going, I’m gonna come.

Maho heard it and felt it as his dick twitched. Bringing most of his cock out of her mouth she gave direct suction to the head and felt his cum hit the roof of her mouth. Coughing then she brought him out of her mouth where the rest of him splattered onto her face.

They both panted as they realized what they had done. Koyuki came to his senses first and moved his face towards hers as he kissed her full on the lips not caring about the cum that was still in there.

Then with a pinch to her ass he spoke into her ear and said, “ Okay now its my turn.”




Author note: Oh God its sooooo bad. *Waits for incoming flames* Another chapter may come if enough people ask for it though. Requests are allowed also. I need ideas.