Positively Sinful

Notes: you know they say that for every sin there is a virtue that corresponds. Now I'm not really gonna get into what they are but I'm pretty sure Leon and D have different views of which side our lovely detective would be on and for that fact if it even mattered.
Also this is my first attempt posted so more that happy to recieve constructive criticsm. Also I cannot spell and currently given what I'm limited to currently I have no spellcheck so my apologies for that already.


Pride

Leon Orcot was not a foolish man. 'Of course your not and yet so many others are' came the light airy but definantly masculine voice in his mind. At least he liked to believe this even if at times he tended to rush in when even a fool would stop for a second and think 'bugger this'. Then again Leon did not tend to think of foolish in that way. His actions were no foolish to him and although they tended to hurt him he was also greatful that those same 'foolish' actions also saved many lives. Detective Leon Orcot knew he was not fool because he tried hard not to decieve himself. 'Though' the detective admitted 'I do wonder how much of the bullshit I get from D is him or myself decieving me'. 'Your better than the general fools that blind themselves and D is a criminal'. For a second the detective could have almost swore that he felt a hand grip his shoulder as he watched D calmly pour the tea. Leon fought the urge to sigh. Either ways he was not a self decieved fool and knew full well that he was by no means a saint - especially when you considered the women and booze - but up until recently he had always considered himself to be a Good guy, with a capital G, and that of course should have been his first sign. Leon knew he boasted alot about girls and work but that was just that, boasting. The belief that he was Good and just? Surely to consider himself good in such a way as though he was better than others meant that he couldn't really be all that good. After all wasn't pride a sin? The first at that. Leon felt guilt crawl into his belly and settle there before a self justified anger fizzled over him just enough to relieve the feeling. Now Leon couldn't claim to have never experienced the sins before, he was human after all, but somehow recently they felt different. Like they were there in person tormenting him. Leon gave a half sigh before shaking his hand to reassure the count that he was fine.

Count D frowned slightly greatful for the fact that his hair covered this while his head was bowed to cut the gorgeous lemon tart his detective had provided. Leon had not been acting himself recently. It was as though his dear detective had something on his mind but no matter how D attempted to gently pry into what was bothering the blond american, the detective not only refused to answer but usually also chose to leave. Leaving was something D did not wish of the young human and though the kami knew he could not keep him, that knowledge did not take away the happiness D felt when in the brash dectives company. So D would leave it alone. For now.

His sins. Ever since he'd met that blasted beffudling creature Count D they'd been larger and by far more vicious. It was like a ribid dog that once had hold of your arm not only refused to let go but shook it's head to savage you. It sounded weird even to Leon but it was the only way the detective could really describe it. Pride itself wasn't the first of the sins Leon actally noticed but he was sure that it must have been the first one. The start of his taint. A taint that of course led right the way back to that fucking devil Count D. A man, no not a man, a being, that could have damned the very angels themselves. 'What?' Leon shook his head a touch. No. No, Count D was just a man. A bizarre and no doubt criminal man but to compaire him to a devil? 'I must be loosing it' Leon sighed before perking up 'Either that or the count was messingh him up with some druggie incense or something again. Pride just smirked at him from the corner of his eye, 'Either that or I really am just losing his mind', Leon thought as he watched the Count sashay his way over to his new and already entraced customers. Not noticing that the debonair greying man he'd associated with the sin was no longer present.


Envy

Now here was a sin that Leon wasn't particularly used to. Even if he over exagerated things occassionally he really was good with women and so had never really seen the draw of this sin. So this was envy huh? Okay sure Leon was man enough to admit that every once in a while he got a little irritated when another guy at the bar snagged the honey he'd been planning on getting but still that wasn't quite the same and seemed inconcenquential in comparison with the tidal wave which had just flowed over the blond. Leon could have almost sworn for a second that he really was drowning in a dark mucky green water as he fought to keep breathing. As the sin washed over him Leon couldn't help but watch as the two, note that two, amazing looking women practically drooled over D. Leon didn't really pay attention to the detail of the women only sparing enough time to not that the brunnet was volumtous where as the red head had an swimmers tone. Shit give them a couple more minutes and they'd probably jump on him. 'It's worse than that though isn't it?' a voice belonging to the pale, dark haired young man asked. Leon barely even blinked at the young man who had his head cushioned on Leons lap eagerly watching the show. 'Yeah, it's not even the fact that they're not paying even the tinyest bit of attention to me. Though to tell the truth that really does't help. I mean come on here I am practically lounging on the couch wearing my favourite and downright sexy tight t-shirt. I'm having a fucking awsome hair day and the bloody girls had barely even registered my existance! Now tell me where the fairness is in that'. Anyway that wasn't what was bugging Leon bu he didn't really feel like discussing is with a figment from D's incense. No that wasn't what bugged him about this sin. What was rearly irking the detective and made the envy inside him swell was that D was doing nothing. Nada zip. D was doing absolutely fucking nothing and had even for the last few minutes been attempting to disuade the girls and their over annoying irritating and stupid attention and yet still those dumb girls were still panting over him like they were in friggin heat. Geez why didn't the girls get the hint and leave D alone. The girls should just grow up and get over themselves. What the? where'd that come from. The envy is cause the girls are digging D not me and it's definantly not due to the fact that the girls have D's undiveded attention while i'm sitting over here like a pet dog thats been told to stay. Shit no no no grr defiently not. Tt's these damn sin hallucination things. Yeah thats it I've been thinking way too much and D's incense has messed with my head thats all. I'm definently jelous that D has the girls attention without lifting a finger. Yeah right that's definantly it. Leon could amost swear that the figment of his imagination seemed smug even as he'd disappeared. 'Great, just great'

TBC hopefully

So basically as I have no idea how awful it is I'm basically hoping for some reviews to let me know if people want me to continue or even if they want to beg me not to.