Darkness Within your Light
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Death Note › Yaoi-Male/Male › L/Light
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
31
Views:
10,233
Reviews:
173
Recommended:
1
Currently Reading:
1
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Darkness Within your Light
Warnings: Yaoi, death, violence, profanity, L’s real name, Raito’s ego, dark themes, fluff themes, mature content later, and a whole lot of other stuff I can’t think of right now.
This is a yaoi fanfic, for those who don’t like that then I will ask polity to push the back button, if you have read this warning and still flame me over it then I will sic Misa on you. Yes I’m that evil. And I know the story title sucks, but it was the only thing I could think of with repeating other story titles.
Pairing: eventually L/ Raito sadly they will not just jump into a closet together, I want more plot then porn(I know its weird) and more character depth(or at least I hope to have depth)
This is my first fic in a long while, so please be kind this is just a prologue( a teaser if you will) I will try to have the first chapter up within the next few days. Tell me what you think, should I continue or no? anyway I ranted at the end of this chapter so if you would like to read that you can. Anyway enjoy my first Death Note story.
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Darkness…that was all he could see. It surrounded him, embraced him, filled him inside and out. He couldn’t feel his body, he tried to move his arm where he assumed his arm would be, but he felt nothing. He tried to shout, to make some sort of noise but..nothing. How could one make noise without a body? Trying not to panic was strangely easy, it was like any emotion he had was muted. He tried to remember what happen. Only to realize that he didn’t even know who he was. Now he did feel some sort of panic.
‘Who the hell am I? Where am I?’
The entity that was nothing, thought to himself or maybe he was even speaking, it was hard to tell in this place. He tried to remember anything at all about himself. Time passed but maybe it didn’t, it may have been years or even minutes since the entity was here.
‘Maybe I’ve always been here? Maybe this is my home? Or maybe this is some form of punishment or something, maybe I did a bad thing and now have to repent or suffer or something.’
The entity snorted or tried to in disgust.
‘Ya, if it is some sort of repentance wouldn’t it be smarter for me to remember what I did in order to know what I’m suppose to have done in order to repent!?’
After that long and drawn out sentence that made no sense at all the entity decided to take a break about thinking of his forgotten memories and to try to see if he could explore his surrounding at all.
After awhile of moving or what he hoped was moving, he finally noticed that the darkness that had always surrounded him seemed…to have lost essence? Well it seemed like it was just less somehow. It was still dark and completely around him, but it didn’t seem like it was invading so much, the entity also noticed that he didn’t feel as muted as before. While before he hardly felt anything now it seemed that he felt cold and scared?
‘Now that’s different and quite annoying. Why would I be scared?’ Just as the entity thought that he was bombed with emotions.
If the entity could have screamed it would have been wailing in agony over the emotion overload that seemed to hit him all at once.
Angry…Fear…Hate…Joy…Revulsion…Terror…Hope…Dread…Disgust…Love?
They all seemed to be equal in intensity and there were more negative emotion then positive ones. All the entity wanted to do was curl into a ball and pray that the emotions would go away, or at least lose some of the intensity.
After a while in which it seemed that an eternity had passed, it finally seemed that the emotions where calming down inside of the entity.
‘Ok then, that was painful and I’ve really have no wish to repeat it. It seems that the less darkness that is inside the more I’ll feel…maybe if I go farther I’ll get my memories back.’
Even thought he didn’t want to suffer the pain he went through, he couldn’t not go. To either suffer in darkness for maybe forever without knowing anything or to brave a little pain and maybe just leave this place.
It didn’t take to long for the entity to make a decision. Even where he to stay he would have been increasable bored out of his mind.
‘So I guess onward and hopefully outward, I just hope I don’t regret what I’m about to do. I must have done something really bad to be here, hopefully I can accept it and really start my repentance.’ With that last determined thought the entity moved onward, unknowingly setting a chain of events that would change not only himself but every world, for either good or evil.
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This is a yaoi fanfic, for those who don’t like that then I will ask polity to push the back button, if you have read this warning and still flame me over it then I will sic Misa on you. Yes I’m that evil. And I know the story title sucks, but it was the only thing I could think of with repeating other story titles.
Pairing: eventually L/ Raito sadly they will not just jump into a closet together, I want more plot then porn(I know its weird) and more character depth(or at least I hope to have depth)
This is my first fic in a long while, so please be kind this is just a prologue( a teaser if you will) I will try to have the first chapter up within the next few days. Tell me what you think, should I continue or no? anyway I ranted at the end of this chapter so if you would like to read that you can. Anyway enjoy my first Death Note story.
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Darkness…that was all he could see. It surrounded him, embraced him, filled him inside and out. He couldn’t feel his body, he tried to move his arm where he assumed his arm would be, but he felt nothing. He tried to shout, to make some sort of noise but..nothing. How could one make noise without a body? Trying not to panic was strangely easy, it was like any emotion he had was muted. He tried to remember what happen. Only to realize that he didn’t even know who he was. Now he did feel some sort of panic.
‘Who the hell am I? Where am I?’
The entity that was nothing, thought to himself or maybe he was even speaking, it was hard to tell in this place. He tried to remember anything at all about himself. Time passed but maybe it didn’t, it may have been years or even minutes since the entity was here.
‘Maybe I’ve always been here? Maybe this is my home? Or maybe this is some form of punishment or something, maybe I did a bad thing and now have to repent or suffer or something.’
The entity snorted or tried to in disgust.
‘Ya, if it is some sort of repentance wouldn’t it be smarter for me to remember what I did in order to know what I’m suppose to have done in order to repent!?’
After that long and drawn out sentence that made no sense at all the entity decided to take a break about thinking of his forgotten memories and to try to see if he could explore his surrounding at all.
After awhile of moving or what he hoped was moving, he finally noticed that the darkness that had always surrounded him seemed…to have lost essence? Well it seemed like it was just less somehow. It was still dark and completely around him, but it didn’t seem like it was invading so much, the entity also noticed that he didn’t feel as muted as before. While before he hardly felt anything now it seemed that he felt cold and scared?
‘Now that’s different and quite annoying. Why would I be scared?’ Just as the entity thought that he was bombed with emotions.
If the entity could have screamed it would have been wailing in agony over the emotion overload that seemed to hit him all at once.
Angry…Fear…Hate…Joy…Revulsion…Terror…Hope…Dread…Disgust…Love?
They all seemed to be equal in intensity and there were more negative emotion then positive ones. All the entity wanted to do was curl into a ball and pray that the emotions would go away, or at least lose some of the intensity.
After a while in which it seemed that an eternity had passed, it finally seemed that the emotions where calming down inside of the entity.
‘Ok then, that was painful and I’ve really have no wish to repeat it. It seems that the less darkness that is inside the more I’ll feel…maybe if I go farther I’ll get my memories back.’
Even thought he didn’t want to suffer the pain he went through, he couldn’t not go. To either suffer in darkness for maybe forever without knowing anything or to brave a little pain and maybe just leave this place.
It didn’t take to long for the entity to make a decision. Even where he to stay he would have been increasable bored out of his mind.
‘So I guess onward and hopefully outward, I just hope I don’t regret what I’m about to do. I must have done something really bad to be here, hopefully I can accept it and really start my repentance.’ With that last determined thought the entity moved onward, unknowingly setting a chain of events that would change not only himself but every world, for either good or evil.
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