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Hold me now
This is my first Yaoi and lemon fic so please be nice, it's not really based on a time, but originally it was ep. 7!
The show is CLANNAD and the pairing is SunoharaXOkazaki!!!!
Disclaimer: Don't own CLANNAD!
BTW, this will prolly have a lot of spelling mistakes, like most of my fics, because, as all of my fics,
I am doing this at 1 am, so that’s why it’ll prolly suck and this is just pointless smut, so it won’t make sense...
Hold me now!
Start!!!!
Okazaki’s POV
We are sitting in his room as usual, me and Sunohara... He never notices the looks i give him, he never see's the hurt in my eyes as he flirts with all of those god damn women! Like right now, he's talking about another stupid girl, a "Beautiful red head with HUGE watery green eyes!” Damn whores! Can't he notice my lustful looks, my heartfelt words; he thinks they are sarcastic, but i mean every one of them. He is beautiful, with silky blond hair, and an oh so beautiful undisciplined grin! I'm in love...
And it's about damn time i make him mine, heh!
Normal POV
"So Okazaki, how should I go about wooing her? Okazaki? OKAZAKI!" Shouted Sunohara. "Huh?" Okazaki said "Sunohara you don’t have a chance with her, but I know who you do!" Okazaki said with a grin. "Who!!!" Said Sunohara excitedly. "Me!" Okazaki said. Sunohara Looked shocked and started to say "Wha-" but got silenced by Okazaki's lips, Sunohara immediately turned beet red and stuttered out "N-n-n-na-nnn-ii-!" but moaned as Okazaki deepened the kiss, licking Sunohara's bottom lip, asking for entrance, which he happily obliged. It soon became a battle of tongues, and, as they say, Things were getting Hot! They separated for breath as Okazaki lifted his shirt up as Sunohara worked on his belt. Said items were discarded they started taking off each other’s cloths.
So, there they were in the stark. Sunohara was blushing madly seeing how big Okazaki was, 12 whole inches! Okazaki walked up to him, with a sultry strut. He started toying with Sunohara's nipple, gaining mewls of pleasure from him. Okazaki snaked his arm down, teasingly brushing Sunohara's hard erection. Sunohara was moaning with want as Okazaki pumped his erection, then Okazaki started fondling his balls. Sunohara was on the edge, when he was just about to cum... Okazaki stopped, and said while Sunohara whimpered. "We can’t have you cumming yet, my kawaii little koi, we haven’t even reached the main course yet!" said Okazaki in a voice filled with mischief. He then put three fingers near Sunohara's mouth and said in a commanding voice "Suck!" which Sunohara gleefully obliged. This had Okazaki quietly moaning and grunting. With Okazaki's fingers thoroughly lathered with saliva, he pushed his first finger into Sunohara's tight hole, moving it slowly; making it hurt less for Sunohara's first time. As Okazaki added his second and third finger, Sunohara was having the time of his life; he never had felt so good in his life and murmured "More Okazaki-Koi..." with want. Deeming Sunohara ready, He took out his fingers, causing Sunohara to whimper, but soon replaced them for something so much better.
Okazaki pulled Sunohara on to his lap, and swiftly entered him. Sunohara started tearing up with pain, but Okazaki kissed the tears away and started moving slowly. Sunohara’s pain was quickly replaced by mind numbing pleasure. Okazaki's Thrusts started getting faster, looking for a certain spot in his new lover. Changing spots every thrust, he quickly found it, causing Sunohara to see white. Their thrusts started getting faster, grinding together without rhythm, in a carnal dance. Soon they couldn’t hold it any more as Sunohara screamed his release clamping down on Okazaki, Pushing him over the edge cumming inside Sunohara’s tight rectum.
As they lay there, on Sunohara's floor, their thoughts were so much different, as for Sunohara's thoughts, they were this "I'm never hitting on a woman again!" And for Okazaki's, his were "Now i have finally claimed my lover!!!!" How sweet!
The end
Yeah it sucked, but i was inspired, and it's late! Constructive criticism welcomed, but if ya don’t like Yaoi, don’t flame.
The show is CLANNAD and the pairing is SunoharaXOkazaki!!!!
Disclaimer: Don't own CLANNAD!
BTW, this will prolly have a lot of spelling mistakes, like most of my fics, because, as all of my fics,
I am doing this at 1 am, so that’s why it’ll prolly suck and this is just pointless smut, so it won’t make sense...
Hold me now!
Start!!!!
Okazaki’s POV
We are sitting in his room as usual, me and Sunohara... He never notices the looks i give him, he never see's the hurt in my eyes as he flirts with all of those god damn women! Like right now, he's talking about another stupid girl, a "Beautiful red head with HUGE watery green eyes!” Damn whores! Can't he notice my lustful looks, my heartfelt words; he thinks they are sarcastic, but i mean every one of them. He is beautiful, with silky blond hair, and an oh so beautiful undisciplined grin! I'm in love...
And it's about damn time i make him mine, heh!
Normal POV
"So Okazaki, how should I go about wooing her? Okazaki? OKAZAKI!" Shouted Sunohara. "Huh?" Okazaki said "Sunohara you don’t have a chance with her, but I know who you do!" Okazaki said with a grin. "Who!!!" Said Sunohara excitedly. "Me!" Okazaki said. Sunohara Looked shocked and started to say "Wha-" but got silenced by Okazaki's lips, Sunohara immediately turned beet red and stuttered out "N-n-n-na-nnn-ii-!" but moaned as Okazaki deepened the kiss, licking Sunohara's bottom lip, asking for entrance, which he happily obliged. It soon became a battle of tongues, and, as they say, Things were getting Hot! They separated for breath as Okazaki lifted his shirt up as Sunohara worked on his belt. Said items were discarded they started taking off each other’s cloths.
So, there they were in the stark. Sunohara was blushing madly seeing how big Okazaki was, 12 whole inches! Okazaki walked up to him, with a sultry strut. He started toying with Sunohara's nipple, gaining mewls of pleasure from him. Okazaki snaked his arm down, teasingly brushing Sunohara's hard erection. Sunohara was moaning with want as Okazaki pumped his erection, then Okazaki started fondling his balls. Sunohara was on the edge, when he was just about to cum... Okazaki stopped, and said while Sunohara whimpered. "We can’t have you cumming yet, my kawaii little koi, we haven’t even reached the main course yet!" said Okazaki in a voice filled with mischief. He then put three fingers near Sunohara's mouth and said in a commanding voice "Suck!" which Sunohara gleefully obliged. This had Okazaki quietly moaning and grunting. With Okazaki's fingers thoroughly lathered with saliva, he pushed his first finger into Sunohara's tight hole, moving it slowly; making it hurt less for Sunohara's first time. As Okazaki added his second and third finger, Sunohara was having the time of his life; he never had felt so good in his life and murmured "More Okazaki-Koi..." with want. Deeming Sunohara ready, He took out his fingers, causing Sunohara to whimper, but soon replaced them for something so much better.
Okazaki pulled Sunohara on to his lap, and swiftly entered him. Sunohara started tearing up with pain, but Okazaki kissed the tears away and started moving slowly. Sunohara’s pain was quickly replaced by mind numbing pleasure. Okazaki's Thrusts started getting faster, looking for a certain spot in his new lover. Changing spots every thrust, he quickly found it, causing Sunohara to see white. Their thrusts started getting faster, grinding together without rhythm, in a carnal dance. Soon they couldn’t hold it any more as Sunohara screamed his release clamping down on Okazaki, Pushing him over the edge cumming inside Sunohara’s tight rectum.
As they lay there, on Sunohara's floor, their thoughts were so much different, as for Sunohara's thoughts, they were this "I'm never hitting on a woman again!" And for Okazaki's, his were "Now i have finally claimed my lover!!!!" How sweet!
The end
Yeah it sucked, but i was inspired, and it's late! Constructive criticism welcomed, but if ya don’t like Yaoi, don’t flame.