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The Making of Something Different

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The Making of Something Different

The Making of Something Different

Keitaro was flying through the air again for doing something perverted or at least that was the claim by Naru who had sent him flying. He still hadn’t worked out how him walking through the halls and seeing her dressed in only a towel as she was on her way back to her room was perverted, or by any means his fault, but he didn’t think he would ever understand. However he was forced to put those thoughts aside as he was about to land, read crash, into what looked like an old shrine.

When he finally hit the shrine he destroyed it and the everything that was on it knocking himself unconscious, which is why he didn’t notice one of the vases crash on his head leak its contents into his open mouth forcing itself down his throat. The vase had a label on it written in old worn out kanji characters saying ‘Bringer of Control.’

It was an hour later that Keitaro woke up and began to make his way home, only briefly glancing at the vase and taking note of its title. However he dismissed as he knew the part of Japan he was in still had a few odd cults that practiced witchcraft, and brewed many esoteric and ineffective ‘magical’ potions.

When he finally managed to make it back home Keitaro knew his day was only going to get worse as he spied Motoko lying on the floor with a basket of laundry that had spilled showing the girls more private garments.

Motoko, seeing Keitaro looking and the bras and panties laying on the floor mysteriously drew her sword, he hadn’t noticed it on her and he was careful to pay attention for its presence, and charged him.

Cringing Keitaro bowed his head and raised his arms shouting “No!” in an effort to fend off the blow. He knew that no matter how much he pleaded that Motoko would still attack, he was therefore greatly surprised when after a moment the attack hadn’t come.

Daring to look up Keitaro saw Motoko standing completely still with a vacant expression on her face. “Motoko-chan?”

“Hai Keitaro-sama?” she replied in a dreamy voice.

“What happened?”

“Keitaro-sama requested me to stop.” She answered in the same state.

Completely bewildered by her answer Keitaro came up with the incredible response of “Huh?”

“Keitaro-sama requested me to stop.” She repeated.

“Why haven’t you moved then?”

“Keutaro-sama has not given me an order.”

Still confused Keitaro just wanted to get away before she came back to herself and tried to attack him again so he said “Ok Motoko-chan, after I leave I want you to go back to normal but forget that you saw me just now.” And with that he turned around and quickly made his way to his bedroom, just barely hearing Motoko’s reply of “Hai Keitaro-sama.”

Keitaro spent the rest of the day in his room trying to figure out what had happened in the hall way. It only took him 20 minutes or so to figure out that Motoko had to do what he said, the rest of the afternoon was spent trying to figure out how it happened.

He knew it had happened today because there were many other times that it would have been more useful to him, the only reason he could think of that this could have happened was because of whatever was at the shrine. Deciding that he needed to know for sure he told Shinobu that he had a few errands to run and that he wouldn’t be home for dinner and not to make food for him. With that done he left on the hour long journey that would return him to the shrine in a less painful manner than his previous trip.

Arriving back at the place he found that there was now a young woman there tending to the shrine, repairing it. Taking a deep breath he walked towards her careful not to step on any broken pieces.

“Um hello, miss.” Keitaro began nervously.

Turning around Keitaro saw one of the most beautiful women he had ever seen. “Yes.” She regarded him coolly.

“I was wondering what this was?” he asked indicating the shrine and the area surrounding it.

“Why do you want to know?” She asked her face not betraying any thoughts.

“Um well, I was here earlier and I guess you could say this broke because me-”

“What!?” Now she was clearly angry.

“Well you see it was all an accident but I was kinda in an accident and flew into the shrine, and now something has happened.”

Not sure she believed him or not she asked “What?”

“Well when I got back to my home one of the people is a kendoist and she was about to attack me but I yelled ‘No’ and she just stopped. She stopped moving, stopped talking and she looked as if she was sleep walking. She kept asking me for orders.” Keitaro said nervous because he was sure he sounded like a crazy person.

At his description her expression turned to one of awe as she started whispering “It worked, it worked.”

“Um excuse me but what worked?”

“The potion!”

“Potion?”

“Yes! The Bringer of Control potion.” She exclaimed.

“Bringer of Control?” He whispered to himself, before he remembered the bottle that was lying next to him when he woke up. “That was what was written on the bottle next to me when I woke up! What does it do?”

“Actually I’m not really sure, the book I found it in said it was supposed to grant the drinker an unheard of amount of power over the world around them. I guess it means that it means that you can control other people. But who knows it could do anything!” she said excited at the prospect.

“How can I get rid of it?”

“Get rid of it?” She asked confused. “Why would you want to get rid of it?”

“Cause if the girls at my house ever found out I could do this they would kill me!” Keitaro shouted scared at just the thought of what they would do to him.

“No the wouldn’t, with this you could stop them from ever laying another finger on you. You could probably make them love you.” She explained grinning. “Besides the book said there was no antidote.”

“If I can’t get rid of it, then do you at least know how it works?” Keitaro asked hoping that at least this way he could avoid using it on accident.

“The book said that you just have to really want the change to happen, you have to really believe that it will work for the power to take hold.” Seeing that he was really confused she sighed and then said, “Fine I want you to order me to get on the walk over and kiss you.”

“Huh, what?”

“No offense, but you’re really not my type, seeing as how you’re a guy and all, so there is no way that I would want to kiss you normally. If you order me to do it and really mean it then you will at least have figured out how to use this power.”

“Um, if you’re really sure.” He said not really convinced that this would work but he decided to try at her nod. “Fine I order you to kiss me.” He said in a quiet voice not really meaning it.

“No, I said you really have to want it, don’t just say. Look you said earlier that this girl was going to hit you, right?”

“Yeah.”

“So you told her to stop, really wanting her to stop. You wanted her to stop with everything in you, right?”

“Yeah.”

“Then order me to kiss you with as much want as you did earlier.”

Understanding a little better Keitaro decided to try it. Squaring his shoulders, lifting his head and speaking in a firm voice he said “I want you to come over here and kiss me.”

To his surprise she walked over with the same dazed look that Motoko had and brought up her hands to wrap around his head before kissing him long and hard, running her tongue over his lips in an effort to get access to his mouth.

By the time she broke the kiss Keitaro was more than a little breathless. He also noticed that the glazed look was gone and she had big smile on her face. “See it worked! By the way you’re not a bad kisser, find someone to practice with and you could be great.”

At that Keitaro blushed red “So I can order people to do something if I want?”

“Yeah, and now you know how! But next you should see if you can do anything else like control the environment or change how a person looks.”

Staring at her confused he just stayed silent.

Sighing she said “Look the book said that the drinker would have power over the world around them, not just over people’s minds. So try to change the environment or even how someone looks, see if it works. The book wasn’t specific I have no idea what powers you have now.”

“Okay, I guess.”

“Just remember you have to want it.”

Nodding his head, he said “The shrine should be fixed and never be able to be broken again,” thinking that as he had broken the shrine he should at least fix it, and this would be the best way to do it.

To his amazement all the broken fragments flew into the air reforming whatever they were before going back to land on the shrine which had fixed itself from his impact.

“Wow!” they both whispered amazed. “It worked.”

“So now try to change someone.”

“Who? There’s only me and you here.”

Thinking about it she had never seen enough of him to know if there was anything that could be changed on him except his eyes, and she didn’t want him to practice on those incase it didn’t work right and he ended up blind. Then she thought about herself, getting an idea she smiled and said “I know, you can change me.”

“Change you? But you’re the most beautiful girl I’ve ever seen, what could I change about you.” He blurted out before realizing what he had said and blushing scarlet.

Blushing slightly she said “You’re sweet, but my body is not perfect.”

“What would you want to change then?”

“My boobs.” She said matter-of-factly causing him to choke. On what she didn’t know but he still choked.

“What!?”

“My boobs, I’ve always wanted them to be a bit bigger.”

“Okay I’ll try, but if you go into a daze like last time how will I know to stop and wont people notice you’re sudden change in size?”

Thinking about it a moment she came up with an idea, pulling off her shirt and bra, exposing her breasts to the cold air making her nipples to harden instantly she said “Come here.”

Trying not to stare at her breasts he walked forward stopping close enough to touch her.

“Good no raise you’re hands and move the about two inches away from my breasts, order my breasts to grow until the fill your hands and for other people noticing just add to the order that anybody who sees them will think that they have always been that size.”

Having nothing to lose and gaining the chance to feel the breasts of a gorgeous woman he once again gained a confident stance and said “Your breasts are too small, they should grow to fill my hands and anyone who sees them will assume that your breasts have always been this size.”

As this was still new to him he was once again shocked to see her boobs filling out and growing bigger soon they had reached his hands and he began to unconsciously grope them.

“You’re pretty good at that, but I think you’ve gotten enough of a feel.”

At that Keitaro instantly let go.

Looking down she admired her new breasts that were completely real, not like those fake silicon ones. “Damn now I’m gonna have to go buy all new bras but damn is this worth it. Unless…” trailing off she looked at him giving him a considering look.

“Unless what?”

“It will cost me a fortune to buy enough bras and shirts that will fit me now. The shirts are unavoidable as they wouldn’t work with how big my breasts are now, but if I didn’t have to buy new bras that would save me a lot of money. In order to do that though I would have to have breasts that would never sag and build muscle in my back so they don’t start sagging.”

“So you want me to change you again so you never have to wear a bra again?” Keitaro asked having managed to tear his eyes away from her magnificent D-cup breasts.

“Yes, but I wouldn’t make you do it for free. In exchange I’ll suck on your dick.”

“What!?”

“Well my breasts were just to prove that you could do it, this would be specifically for me. So I’d have to pay you back somehow.”

“You don’t have to.” He stuttered out.

“Yes I do, otherwise I would feel guilty for using you.” She said full of conviction.

Not trusting his voice he just nodded, before getting his hormones under control and stating “Your breasts will forever be firm and any changes you need to undergo to achieve this will be done.”

While nothing obvious happened she could feel her breasts become lighter as she noticed the muscles in her back become changing, becoming stronger.

Smiling she said “It works,” before remembering what she had promised and dropped to her knees reaching out to undo his belt and pants, pulling both his pants and boxers down seeing his hard cock. While it wasn’t laughably small it was still below average.

Deciding to give him some advice she said “You know with your power you might want to make your dick bigger. You’re not too small but I think most women would like it better if you were somewhat bigger, say a little thicker and probably twice as long.”

Because she hadn’t insulted him or laughed Keitaro listened to her knowing she was right from the porn magazines he had hidden in his bedroom. “Okay, but can you do like I did and hold out you’re hands so I know when to stop.”

“Sure” and with that she put one hand around his dick so he would know how thick to make it and another about four and a-half inches away from his dick, making it so he would be almost two inches thick and nine inches long. “This is good.”

Nodding he ordered himself to grow and watched as he went from below average to far above average.

“This is much better, you’ll be sure to impress any woman now.” With that she bowed her head and took him into her mouth sucking lightly.

Keitaro instantly moaned loving the feel of her warm mouth on his cock. Not knowing what to do with his hands he put them on her head using them to pump her head up and down his dick. “Ungh, that’s wonderful, you’re so good at this.”

With that he pushed her head as far down as it would go, forcing her to take him into her throat. It was at this point that Keitaro blew his load, it was his first experience with sex and had almost no endurance.

As she pulled off of him she opened her mouth to show him his cum and winked before making an obvious swallowing motion.

“Not bad, but you’ll really have to work on you’re staying power if you want to satisfy you’re woman. But don’t get any ideas, you’ll have to find someone else to practice with.” She said with a saucy grin.

Laughing slightly Keitaro shoved his now flaccid member in his pants. “Thanks for all your help.”

“No problem, it was my pleasure.”

Turning to walk away he heard her say “Don’t forget to practice, you’ll never know what you’re capable of if you don’t try.”

Nodding Keitaro thanked her again before heading back to Hinata Sou.

The return trip seemed to fly by as he was lost in thought at what he could do now that he had these powers and before he knew it he was at the front door to the inn.

Shaking himself out of his thoughts Keitaro took a deep breath to steady himself and realized that he smelled like cum, and he knew that Kitsune at least would know what the scent was. Knowing that he needed a bath he thought that a soak in the hot springs would do him some good, it was late enough that the girls should already be asleep and he could use them without interruption.

However it was when he walked into the changing room that he noticed that the girls clothes were there meaning they were in the hot springs. Not wanting to use his little tub Keitaro decided to use a little of his power and said “The girls will not take any notice of me in the bath.”

With that he shed his clothes, rinsing himself off and wrapped a small towel around his waist before entering the springs. The girls didn’t even notice that he was there and simply continued talking amongst themselves.

Reassured that his command had worked Keitaro walked to a secluded area of the springs and shed his towel before slipping in to water, letting his muscles relax.

Closing his eyes he sat there and soaked for what seemed like ages until he heard the girls start getting out of the water. Unable to resist he opened his eyes, watching them leave getting an eyeful of each girl.

They were beautiful, all of them even little Shinobu and Su with their barely developing bodies. Mutsumi with her huge breasts, Kitsune whose breasts almos rivaled Mutsumi’s, Naru with her perfectly proportioned body (at least to his mind), Motoko with her firm legs and inbredible but that looked like you could bounce a quarter off them and then there was Shinobu and Su who while only having just entered their teens were growing nicely and already had cute little bubble butts and handful sized breasts that were perfect for sucking on. He almost didn’t stop himself from following them out of the water. His perverted side was dreaming up all sorts of naughty ideas but there was one that he wasn’t able to resist.

“From now on all attractive females who enter Hinata-sou will remove their clothes as soon as they enter and will take no notice of their lack of clothing in addition no male except myself will notice anything out of the ordinary.” The was probably the most complex command that he had issued but he definitely wanted it.

Anxious to see if it had worked Keitaro hurried from the bath entering the house naked.

“Urashima!”

“Keitaro!”

He knew he was in trouble when both girls started running at him with fist and weapon poised to strike.

Panicking Keitaro reactively yelled “Stop!” and just like before everyone stopped their eyes gaining a glassy look.

Sighing in relief he looked down finally noticing that he was naked and was extremely hard. He instantly knew what had set the girls off and decided to just a to his previous command. “From here on if I choose to wear no clothing in the house none of you will notice, nor will anyone who enters Hinata sou,” it was at this point that the perverted side of his mind added “unless you are horny and need to use me to relieve yourself.”

Not believing that he had just said that Keitaro didn’t notice the command take hold and the girls until they began to ignore him and dry off before entering the house having left all their clothes in the basket.

Drying quickly Keitaro entered the house finding all the girls in the living room playing games and watching T.V., well except for Kitsune and Mutsumi who were playing a drinking game.

Keitaro just sat on the couch watching the girls move around the house as normal oblivious to the fact that they had no clothes on.

“I’m hungry,” Su complained. “Shinobu got any bananas.”

“Auuuu Su we don’t have any, you ate them all at lunch remember?” Shinobu said laughing slightly at the foreign girl who could eat more than the rest of them combined.

Pouting Su said “Okies.”

“Hey Su, you should look to Keitaro he’s got a big banana filled sucker between his legs, if you suck hard enough he’ll spurt banana crème into your mouth.” Kitsune suggested drunkenly.

“Really!?”

“Yep, just don’t bite cause then you won’t get any of the crème.” And before anyone could stop her Su had latched her mouth onto his member sucking as hard as she could causing Keitaro to throw his head back in pleasure at the suction her small mouth created.

Lasting only slightly longer than earlier Keitaro shot his load into her mouth, “Mmm Keitaros that was tasty, ya got any more in your banana.”

Not really paying attention to what he was saying Keitaro said “Yeah but you’ll have to come into my bedroom for it, so they won’t interfere with anything we do.” Not realizing it but the last part of his statement had been a command making it impossible for the rest of the tenants to stop her from sucking on his cock all night long.

“Okies!” Grabbing his hand she ran to his room dragging him behind her in her hast to get more of his good tasting crème.

“Alrighty Keitaros get your banana sucker ready so I can get some more of that crème.”

“Ah Su it’s already ready you just have to suck on it some more, this time don’t just suck on it, if you kiss it and lick it like a popsicle I’ll have more crème for you, but to get the most crème you have to put my entire banana in your mouth.”

“Okies.” She said as she began to kiss and lick his shaft making it longer and harder.

Despite the fact that he was hard Keitaro knew that he wouldn’t cum much if at all but he didn’t want to disappoint so and so commanded that he be able to create enough sperm to fill her and enough for one more orgasm after that. Feeling his balls swell he knew that he had succeeded.

“Oh god Su, you’re really good at this.” This time he was lying down on a futon and was able to pump his hips into the small girl’s mouth each time hitting the back of her throat, until one time he actually slid down her throat causing her to groan, but the sensation sent Keitaro over the edge as he started spewing his cum down her throat and then in her mouth before slipping out completely and shooting his cum all over her face.

“That was incredible Su.”

“Umhm, You squirted lots more crème than last time.” She said smiling. A moment later she frowned however as she moved her hand down to her pussy feeling it dripping. “Huh, I’m all wet.”

“Hmm?”

“When I was all done sucking you between my legs I was all wet.”

“Oh that’s cause you’re horny.”

“Horny? Does it taste good?” She asked naively.

Laughing at this Keitaro said “I don’t know you tell me.”

“Huh?”

“What you just did is something girls do when their horny.” He explained after he stopped laughing.

“But Keitaro’s what is horny?”

“You know what sex is right?”

“Yeppers, it’s when a man and woman make a baby.”

“Well kinda, but you see when someone gets horny, they have sex so they’re not horny anymore. Too make themselves not horny a man takes his banana or cock and puts it in the slit between a woman’s legs.”

“Okies, so if I don’t want to be horny anymore I have to have sex.” Not really understanding she hopped up grabbed Keitaro’s cock and sat down on it shoving six inches into her pussy. “Owwww!”

“Oh Su, I’m sorry but it hurts the first time a girl has sex, but if you just stay still the pain will go away and you’ll fell a lot better.”

“Okies,” she replied with a few tears leaking down her face.

Keitaro was having another dilemma though, because Su was so tight he was going to cum soon and didn’t want to before Su did, wanting to make her first time enjoyable. Ordering himself not to come until she did at least twice Keitaro felt the pressure in his balls lessen.

“Keitaros it doesn’t hurt anymore.”

“Good, now you just bounce up and down and it’ll feel much better.”

Doing that they both started to moan in pleasure as she began to feel more full than ever and he enjoyed the unparalleled tightness of a virgin.

Niether one noticed that more and more of his shaft was slipping into her until he slipped past her cervix and into her womb causing her first orgasm coating his lower body in sticky fluids.

“Sex is very good Keitaros!”

“Good, just keep bouncing and it’ll get better.” He encouraged not wanting his first experience with sex to end so quickly.

Tired of just laying still when he felt Su getting tired and not bouncing as much he pulled her down onto him and then rolled over. Pushing up onto his elbows he leaned down and kissed Su adding his tongue to the mix just like he had with the girl earlier, realizing that he had never gotten her name.

Pumping his hips he continued to pound into her as she wrapped her legs around his hips bringing them both slowly closer to another orgasm.

What felt like an eternity later but was really only twenty minutes Keitaro felt her clamp down around his cock once again signaling that it was time for him to come as well. Spewing his load he filled her small womb with his cum, neither worrying about the potential hazard of her getting pregnant.

“That was wonderful Keitaros,” Su said sleepily after she came down from her high.

“Umhm.”

“Can I sleep here tonight?”

“Sure.” With that he rolled over so she was laying on his chest with his cock still lodged within her before kissing the top of her head and joining her in sleep.
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