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Really excellent. I always found it weird that Rik's chest said 'Loveless' and his fighter kept saying he loved him. I was like 'Well, he must be lying or somebody needs to get them a new chest tatto." I really like the way you paired them and how you had Rik's brother come into the mix to straighten things out. While I haven't seen all of Loveless yet, I really thought Rik should demand to know exactly how the blonde felt. I mean, if you think about it, one is a slave and a slave that obeys his master and seeks to protect and comfort him. It only follows naturally that he should try to be the 'love' that his master needs as he is loveless. But that would just mean he was serving him and not actually loving him. Make sense? Probably not. LOL But I liked that they actually did feel the same. And the fact that 'Loveless' changed to 'Beloved' had me purrrrr. :) Good job.

Awesome. Very sexy. =love=

This was a very cute story. For once, I didn't hate Semie lol. I think you did a very nice job. Usually I tend to say any from one-shots, but I am glad I read this one. I hope to see more work from you with this pairing in the future!

This was just awesome! It was so sweet, and I love first time fics between Soubi and Ritsuka. Ritsuka really is just too cute for his own good. Thanks for writing such a great fic. Yours Herme

Hello!
Uau, this was really intense and well written!
Just wish it was a little longer 'cause it's really hard to find good Loveless stories such as yours!
Thanks for writing and please write more!!!
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Cute! although i haven't seen Loveless, i know all the characters and stuff so it was cool! i'm waiting for the manga of Loveless to come out in America which will be in a couple of months! i'm soooo happy! yea! anyways, just like da rest of your stories....great!

This fic was wonderfully writen. Who doesn't love Sobei x Ritsuka goodness. ^.~ I enjoyed reading it and hope you continue writing Loveless fics. Huggles
Nikkler

I lOVED it.

ah! somebody did my idea before i could (ritsuka becoming beloved, etc.)!! lol, but i loved it so good work ^__^ i hope you write more loveless fics!!