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April 9, 2021 at 12:00 AM
Where is the original work by Whiteshirt?
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August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I find the whole first few chapters very interesting and just amazing. Besides the amount of character development and conflict, the story of love between Lee and Sakura to be the most compelling. I say great job all around.
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April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, nice follow on. Maybe Yelan will inform them about the whole "broadcasting" thing in future. Not that we'll actually get to "see" it. Oh, well, no matter. Very nice, quite enjoyable. And now I once again bid you adieu. Laters.
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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You're welcome, and a very satisfying conclusion all around. Although I must call you on one last, tiny mistake - at the beginning of the epilogue, you comment on the wedding being one of the most important in the"early 20th century", when I'm pretty sure you meant "early 21st century". Well, good luck in your future fics. Laters.
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April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Geez, these guys can't take a hint! But then it was prophesied to end this way, for the elders that is. I look forward to their final fall, and Sakura and Syaoran's nuptials! Until then, laters.
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April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Somehow this feels just a little bit OOC for Touya/Tori. I mean, I can see him grinding at the bit at the idea of his baby sister getting married to, well, anybody really, but I have a hard time seeing him actively trying to off the would-be groom! That aside, great chapter, and I look forward to the wedding itself! Laters.
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April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And we're sure he's dead this time, right? Just checking. I await the elders' fall, as they dearly have it coming. Also, this chapter you repeated called Yue "Uai", you might want to fix that. Well, until next time. Laters.
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April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Of all the Star Trek movies you could choose to totally rip off, you have to pick V:The Final Flophouse, I mean, Frontier? Also, the last line from Tarsis read, "They shall for before you, master," when I think you mean it to say, "They shall fall before you, master." Other than that, nice chapter, definitely answers my previous question, and I merrily await the next one and Sian's eventual end. Until then. Laters.
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Umm, did you maybe accidentally skip a chapter, cause we've gone back to Section 32 and there hasn't been any confirmation of Sian's and his crew's final permanent demise? Just saying. Well, until next chapter. Laters.
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September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I dunno, Galaxy Quest maybe? One slight problem here, but unless my memory is faulty, in both the original Japanese and the English dub versions, Syaoran didn't choose to go first during the Final Judgement, Yue made that decision all on his own without either of their inputs. It would probably work better if the Dark Syaoran had said, "If you'd been smart, you'd have begged Yue to judge Sakura first and watched her fail before facing him yourself." Or something to that effect. Other than that, still good, and I still look forward to more. Laters.