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What's that old saying? Something about, "When it rains..." Oy, this is getting complicated. And if the Elders actually stoop so low as to attempt assassination to get their precious way, they all ought to be put death upon said "dissolution" of the Council. Just saying... By the way, did you mean for this sentence to read this way - "Now, I hove you can make the few moments you have as meaningful as possible." Also - "I possibly give the Karthing name new life." Well, until the next time.

Okay, to each their own. Nice end to the arc, and next we do the time plot, huh? Sounds Terminator esque, too. Well, until it begins. Laters.

I thought that sounded a lot like Naraku. So the Inuyasha gang ascended to a new level, huh? Okay.... Well, the girls are back to normal and Darren's dead, so pretty much all that's left is settling the election. Oh, and you still write in the present tense, you should really try writing in past tense, it'll flow much better.

Whew! Almost went all the way into T1-T3 territory there. Nice cliffie, though, new arc sounds interesting, and I did like the hint that Sian may have faked his death somehow. And let me guess, those three virgins are known in the Japanese version as Chiharu, Rika, and Naoko, right? Until next time. Laters.

Umm, you seem to have accidentally skipped "Wills Of Steal" there. Think you can throw it in real fast? Good job so far, by the way, though you might want to try writing in past tense instead of present tense. Just saying. Laters.