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*snickers* I have this sneaky suspicion that Anya's gonna fit right in with this crazy group and possibly Rei as well. *snickers* I'm sure Hakaryuu would be more than willing to stretch slightly to accomidate them all.

*blinks at the sudden image of Sanzo between Goyja and Rei* *shakes head* Sorry, got distracted there by that twin thing you got me hooked on with Gun and Hunter.....

aw! Shi's so cute and sweet. *cackles* love her attitude towards Konzen. Just like brother and sister. Always annoying the other and getting away with it.

So, which one does she have a crush on: Tenpou or Kenren?

*snickers* Why can I see her wearing a skirt and her military jacket over it? or worse, the dress and their version of combat boots?

*drools* Sanzo in just those tight jeans and his black sleeveless tight top.....

And I can see him leaving the would be rapists to his three companions....

I am normally a yaoi fan I have to admit, but you sound liek you have an interesting idea and I'd like to give you some advice.

Include more description in your writing and it with make your humour stand out more, you seem to have quite a good knack for speech so balance it with description.

Also, your heroine is called Shi-ne, now this maybe deliberate on your side but if not, "Shi-ne" is an order you give to someone which translates as "Die!", "Just die" or "you die".

But still I am interested

*giggles* Oh I'm gonna like her!

can't wait to see more.*smirks*

Oooohh, a mystery! Top notch writing, as always. And if The Merciful Goddess is interested, look out! Do tell us more!

Saiyuki!!!! Woohoo!!!

*grins* Interesting start. So which of the Blaize group is this or is it someone completely new?