rate_review Reviews

I'm really enjoying this story and can't wait for more. Especially Hakkai's reaction to Rei explaining what happened in the cave.

OMFG! Ok, so hopefully 3rd times the charm with this freaking review BS! Jeez! Love hakuryu's trying to save Jyo. Not everyday one is almost disembowled for just walking. Makes for an exciting day. Poor Kai, all confused and whatnot. Sexual repression with do that to you. If I had my way his limiters would be crushed into dust and tossed into the wind. lovely lovely youkai. more please! :D

*snickers* Hey Gojya, congradulations. Someone finally thinks of you as a threat. Too bad it's Hakkai in full youkai mode.

*cackles*

Lovely, darling. More please?

Ah, Hakkai gets a mate! Not that they've consu-mate-d yet, but it's just around the corner. I'm so happy for him! Excellent writing, as always, and wow has it taken a long time to get to this point! But on earth as in Heaven, so I guess Tenpou and Shi have to do it first for it to happen with Hakkai and Rei. This is an amazing story you have crafted. Good job!

Ooh, finally! Tenpou is being so cute, not knowing what the hell to day. Makes me wonder if he's ever even had any sort of relationships other than professionally-based friendships.

And the L.A. Guns rock, plain and simple. I believe I have Cocked and Loaded on vinyl. I can't believe I just admitted that.

After catching up with the chapters I was behind I was blown away with how good you are with the 'bon mot'. There are a lot of bumbling things Tenpou could have said to answer, but "To see if there can be an us." was just perfect. He shows her that he accepts her as an equal in his personal life as well as professional, and understands that he wants her as a fully participating and consenting partner, not a "UGG, me drag you back to cave" submissive. And speaking of consenting, Hakkai is doing well in the cave to have let his ardour cool to the point where he understands that Rei is a consenting partner. Well done, Phoenix! Excellent descriptiveness.

it's about freaking time! Christ! *kicks Tenpou* DUMBASS! *is angry at males this week and therefore has no sympathy for his ass* she's gonna get another slap in before she says yes, right? :P

*snickers* Poor Tenpou. He's gonna be groveling for a while....

*purrs* Hakkai as Youkai is *HOT*!!!

MOre please???

EEK! *melts* hotty hot hotness. Send him to come bite me. It's about time Kai got frisky. YOu know the cute cool headed ones hafta bust loose sometime! Lovely chapter, as always.