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for Shades of Time

by vbruce

person Tazzy
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*cackles* Poor Tenpou has no idea what he's setting the young men up for is he? The girls will expect that sort of romance in their future as wel.

*snerks* Lightning bolt up the ass... better than his head up there I guess...
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! HE WENT TO GET HER! :D See? Men of intelligence are easy to find.... in fanfics.. *is depressed now* I'm proud of Tenpou! Now if he could just tell her he loves her and needs her and Shi could just forget me was stupid for time immemorable, then we could have a romance! :D Oh, but I suppose that's easier said than done, forgiving stupidity and all... More please :)
person Tazzy
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* Hey Hakkai... this is your wake up call... your youkai wants to get *laid* and take you along for the ride.....

*claps* Another lovely chapter, my dear.
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
At least Kai was smart enough to say "I don't wanna hurt you" rather than just "stay away!" He has SOME wits about him still. Boy... lust turned into murderous tendencies quite quickly. Guess you gotta hump and run with him, eh? Dun mine. I'll whip myself into running shape before our date. I'm dying for the next chap! I wanna know if she's smart enough to run!
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is he going to go? Is he going to destroy things until he finds her? Tune in next week... oh wait... YAY! Another chappie! I can totally sympathize with Shi in the whole guys only wanting you when you've given up on them sort of thing. yeah.... POor girl. Maybe tenpou's smart enough to fix it in time though! He'd better go after her, or I'm gonna start breaking things >.<
person Tazzy
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*cackles8 Run, Shi, 'cause Tenpou's gonna chase ya even if ya don't realize it...

Still loving this story....
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"fight now, fuck later" sounds like the story of my life. Oh wait, that was prolly way more than anyone wanted to know... Don't apologize for life getting in the way. It happens to the best of us. I liked this chapter. It left off on a delicious cliffhanger if ever there was one - youkai kai.... mmmmmmmm XD
person Tazzy
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*cackles* Still love Ai...

She's got her priorities right for a dragon....
person Tazzy
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*smirks* Konzen is so beautifully evil when he wants to be. I love him for that....

*coos* Poor Shi.... she should indulge while Tenpou's asleep.
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL I totally wanna draw Hakuryuu laughing now! How cute! Even scarey huge could-flambe-you-before-you-blinked dragons can poke fun wee! Ok, so he's not scarey like I'd run screaming scarey, but I would if we weren't on the same side >.< I wanna know wtf he scorched! I'm totally ready for Rei to go in and chop some evil fuckers up. Is Kai gonna go without his limiters and go ape shit and mess up some bad guys? Lovely chapter, it has me al curious. Next chapter please! ;D

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